TheMick Blog Post: Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:28 AM CST

TheMick uijongbu South Korea
Posted:Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:28 AM CST

REDS! A poem for those who lost out on love

REDS

The Carmal colored tip that touches my lips
Reminds me of the last time we kissed

The fire burning from the inside out
Reminds me of the love you said would never burn out

The white paper slowly turning brown
Reminds me of how quickly the pure turn around

The smoke dancing in the air
Reminds me of the love that was there

The cherry getting closer, Burning my finger tips
Reminds me of the truth behind your lips

The filter that i throw away
Reminds me of the things we did not say

The ashes, Thats left is all i see
Reminds me of the past that use to be

By David

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danirose saddle brook, New Jersey USA
Sun Nov 15, 2009 2:01 PM CST
wow i am speechless
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sultryash Bridgetown, Saint Michael Barbados
Sun Nov 15, 2009 8:52 PM CST
nice poem !!!
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bapsineurope Kansas City, Missouri USA
Mon Nov 16, 2009 12:59 AM CST
I like this and ok the image that popped into my mind was smoking a cigarette and maybe thats not what you were going for but that is what my first thought was....sorryblushing
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tetsy New York, New York USA
Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:22 AM CST
Love is sometimes unkind isn't?..it's not love until we know what true love is.

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