jojo1859 Blog Post: Sun Feb 8, 2009 6:11 PM CST

jojo1859 Dearborn, Michigan USA
Posted:Sun Feb 8, 2009 6:11 PM CST

a poem I wrote when I was 13... re-edited

Leave today and I will follow
Say you'll come tomorrow and I will wait forever
I want to spend eternity with you
Don't let me go, and I will not let you go
Hold me and I will hold you
Look inot my eyes and I will look into yours
Don't forget me becuse I will never forget you

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DRSharma kathmandu, Kathmandu Nepal
Sun Feb 8, 2009 7:57 PM CST
Dear friend,
It is not only your feelings you touched everyone feelings. Keep your creativeness.

DR Sharma
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geminiman61 nottingham, Nottinghamshire, England UK
Mon Feb 9, 2009 5:47 AM CST
Fantastic it bought a tear to my eye maybe because i feel down after a break up and it cut like a knife straight to my heart thanks for putting my feelings into words hope you have made a fortune out of your words because you have or had a real talent

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