Posted:Mon May 4, 2009 8:03 PM CST
what my heart looks like.
looks like someone stepped on it.
looks like its been dropped.
looks like its losing its color.
looks like its falling apart.
looks like its been hit with a hammer.
looks like its about to crumble.
looks like its been glued together.
looks like its missing most of its pieces.
looks like it doesn't want to work.
looks like it needs cpr.
looks like its had enough
of everyone walking all over it.
it won't let anyone in,
it won't let the past out.
it feels much colder than ever before.
it won't let me give it away anymore,
it tells me it can't take another break.
that's it then, i'm done.
Donss
Colombo Sri Lanka
Tue May 5, 2009 3:21 PM CST
God, what with heart. It sounds not like a med condition... But you could write poetry alright. Clever you.
YewEye
Racine, Wisconsin USA
Tue May 5, 2009 11:05 PM CST
You're young. Pick up the pieces, glue them back together and with dignity, and move on with a graceful stride.
efem2000
Port Moresby Papua New Guinea
Wed May 6, 2009 8:00 PM CST
mmmmmm, that heart sounds like a heart that has seen the whole world, it sounds like its at the edge of world's deepest cliff, just a few seconds before it falls off and you will see no trace of it. Please someone out there get into this heart and mould it into its original heart.
noisypitta
Lakeview, Oregon USA
Fri May 8, 2009 11:39 AM CST
A heart that has seen alot in it's time. The heart may need time to heal and go on. To the heart...happiness, trust and love.
Nice one.