AnnBrown Blog Post: Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:23 PM CST

AnnBrown oveido, Florida USA
Posted:Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:23 PM CST

Traumatic heartache

I think this time it's over. I fell in love - so briefly. All the petals have fallen to the floor and they lie there, their dieing veins withering away...

I still see him, still feel those eyes upon me, those glimmering emerald jewels. I walk and I feel his presence about me - if I turned, I might see him there, behind me, trying to catch up.

How is it there is a cord between us still? Some invisible chain just about to break apart? I have not spoken to him in several days, just lingering in silence, held back against my will. Don't contact him, my mind says, and my heart quakes for this, afraid one tug and the cord might be severed forever. Just wait, I'm told, and I suffer the darkness of my pathos mingled with the bruises of jelousy, imagined or real.

Be happy should he move on, I say. This will make the permanence solid and not a ground made of glass; this would be the point of recovery built after the embitterment, crushed ego, and devistation. It would be a gift of selfless love to accept him happy in the arms of another, and it would be poinient, all those hours when the petals were still upon that rose, only falling one by one without my even realizing til there were only a few left. And I clung to them even as they gently fluttered away, escaping my fingers, wafting in the rising breezes of change.

I did love him. And I wanted to love him. He very nearly loved me; for a moment. Even now? No way to know. No way to understand. Just silence and the very last ounce of life draining from those petals at my feet. One more second or two; one more day.

Yes, be happy then. He will find comfort and life in another's eyes, in another's voice. Be glad. The possibilities have been washed away with what will not be known and only linger as the thoughts of that rose.

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Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:25 PM CST
'I did love him. And I wanted to love him. He very nearly loved me; for a moment. Even now? No way to know. No way to understand.'

Your story is sad and heartbreaking. And not because you loved someone who didnt love you back. But because he didnt and dont give a fuck about how your doing seeing as though, reguardless if he felt the same or not, he could have made an effort to make sure you were at least all right. People kill themselves over this type of pain. the inner physical pain that you can get rid of with Ibprophen and wont heal like a cut or scratch. That pain is severe and it last as long as you do. Worse before its better. And this is a prime example of why i never open up enough to let people in. Because i dont want to end up giving my heart to some soulless fuck who dont give a shit about me once he's had his fill. Once he's gone dont think twice about me and how i'm doing. If i'm ok with this pain that you cant shake. I dont want to end up 'loving' someone who really dont care about me. No phone calls, dont drop by, no emails. It's like they were full in your life then nothing, like they never existed. You almost start to feel liek you made them up.. HOw can you haev someone everyday of your life and them never see them again.?

Thank you for snatching me out of this fairytale i was almost in that i wanted love from someone. No thank you, i'm good!!
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StressFree small city, Kalmar Sweden
Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:10 AM CST
Time will heal your heart and mind.

Great piece of descriptive writing. We all can relate to this.

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Galactinad jys, Leiria Portugal
Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:44 AM CST
if you had true love from him and been with you living,and was short and gone away; WHY YOU SHOULD MOURN OR SAD,OR WHY YOU SHOULD REJOICE WITH HIM OR WITH AN OTHER ??

IS IT LOVE SO WHO BRING SADNESS OR JOY SHORT OR LONG IN LIFE ?

So don,t let your mind wander or wondering ,just let peace and true love rest and be with you in heart and mind.
and forget about such things,if it do not live with you in true and in love!
For true love and peace is greater than man lover to you,and is forever with you,if you let it reign in your mind and heart.

man can love woman today,tomorow he dies,or woman love man today,and tomorow take an other,if he was not good for her.
so why then is sadness and mourning or why marriage at all ?
IS BETTER TO BE IN LIFE WITH ONE THING PURE AND TRUE THAN WITH MANY AND UNTRUE AND IMPURE !

SO DON,T BOTHER YOURSELF ANY MORE, JUST FIRST TREAT LIFE IN YOU GOOD, AND IN OTHERS ,THAT YOU TO FIND PEACE IN HEART.
AND DON,T BE EXCITED IN MEN OR IN THINGS MUCH.
But if God gives you true and good man to love, then take it and keep love with him.
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AnnBrown oveido, Florida USA
Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:31 AM CST
Thanks for the encouragement, guys. I'm alright, really. Just needed to bleed openly for a moment.

It was worth it, actually. That which does not conquer us makes us stronger, right?
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Galactinad jys, Leiria Portugal
Wed Jul 22, 2009 1:53 PM CST
you are stronger, when you let peace and love in you.
and forget about things that last not:long in true living with you;whether good or bad.
Those good that are with you every day: them don,t forget:
example:fresh air,water,sun shine, and earth.

greetings.

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