Raven0 Blog Post: Sat Oct 17, 2009 1:04 AM CST

Raven0 Right here, Alberta Canada
Posted:Sat Oct 17, 2009 1:04 AM CST

When it's quiet

When we are beset by silence, it is our way, to end it.
Like the frightened beasts we are, we have to end what we cannot comprehend.
To destroy what is.
Whether or not is be good, or bad for us, ourselves.
The void, the blank slate, it must be filled, with something, almost anything.
We talk to ourselves, in the lonliness, to end it.
Social beasts, though, even some of us despise socialalities.
We draw, we write, little nothings, meaninglessness, to end the true nothings we believe we are faced with.
Denials of the voids.
It cannot be there, for I am there, something must be done.
So we scream in the silence.
We violate the nothing with something.
Paint on walls.
Words on clay tablets.
We hear that the silence is a test of patience, the blank canvas, a test of mind, willpowers of creativity.
It's all something to see in ourselves, what we are, and how we think.
Never the tiny wisp of image, of thought, that maybe, just maybe, we should do nothing at all.
Just breath the void.
To exist in the utter absolute of nothing at all.
Maybe, in that way, we can see deeper into ourselves.
Stare at the night.
But then, we are what we are, creations, constructs that cannot feel to be, in the nothing.
For us, there has to be something.
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There is no void . . . . . . .
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The blankness cannot go unfilled . . . . . . .
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There is no nothing . . . . . . . . .
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Now scream




Comments


Redex Wansbeck, Northumberland, England UK
Sat Oct 17, 2009 5:06 AM CST
If I could send a field of lovely flowers I would fill that space

Then scream, Thankyou for that share.teddybear
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Travisc06489 Groton, Connecticut USA
Sat Oct 17, 2009 7:30 AM CST
Wow I'm moody... I have to be in the right "mood" to give a proper analysis of poetry. Right now I'm full of energy and mischief and all sorts of things that make poetry seem bland. Though I can certainly see the reality of your poem... almost everything we do is to fill up the nothing with something (much like why I said all this instead of saying "nice poem").dunno laugh
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rubendario Hartford, Connecticut USA
Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:53 AM CST
Nice!! But it is during these times that we grown from within!! thumbs up hug bouquet grin cool
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aspieJohn Dumfries, Virginia USA
Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:05 PM CST
ahhh!!!! lol Your poem here rocks ; )

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