Posted: May 23, 2006, 12:40 PM CST
In response to:
with broken spirit inside
feelings of soul so hard to abide
some have been hidden away
and it seems they are there to saty
each and every day is the same
life's spirit flickers like a low burning flame
the spirit knows not joy sadness nor fear
with eyes that cannot shed one tear
the evening long and into the night
sleep evades the soul with a vengeful fight
shadows dance slowly across the floor
brinning bacl past memories once more
no feelings of happiness or pain
knowing not loss nor gain
a spirit that can no longer give nor take
no feelings of any kind can it make
only my God knows the greatest sin
is to break one's spirit from within
this only he knows,but the spirit never shows
mine was broken long ago
im new at this forum thing but not new to the feeling you wrote about in this poem & god willing one day it will go away or god will take it from me but it that dosent happen for me & it does for you please if possible let me know how it feels to be unbroken till then you are still the sweetest angel i know
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