Posted: Nov 8, 2007, 10:38 PM CST
To tread upon the dangerous ground
Of broken glass and burning coals
To walk upon the fallen stars
Whose points can stab right through the soles
Of tattered cloth designed to save
The skin of one who finds the tolls
Of lives that break through fiery dreams
To grasp at those who walk the path
Of carrying ones whose weight grinds down
The feet of those who fail at last
To tread upon the dangerous ground
And lie, now still, in broken glass
-Me, just now
Constructive Criticism welcome.
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