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When the last Unicorn Died.

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When the last Unicorn Died.

Posted: Oct 1, 2006, 7:06 PM CST
"When The Last Unicorn Died."

A light was within the Unicorn. A light that gave forth warmth. A warmth that had power. The power to love.

Being alone the Unicorn's love lost its power.

The power of its love had no one to warm. The warmth of its power faded. The light within the Unicorn grew weaker each day.

One day the light went out and the Unicorn died.

"There Is No Magic Without Love."



By Rillyniceguy
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Abracadabra
Heaven, Pennsylvania USA
Posted: Oct 1, 2006, 7:18 PM CST
Damn that really hit home. You make me feel like a Unicorn. crying
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Posted: Oct 1, 2006, 7:28 PM CST
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Damn that really hit home. You make me feel like a Unicorn.
I think we all do at times. crying
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AdventureBegins
Zanesville USA
Posted: Oct 1, 2006, 7:30 PM CST
I would like to beleive the last unicorn never dies.

Else hope and magic would depart the earth.
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naughtynnice
wellington, Wellington New Zealand
Posted: Oct 1, 2006, 7:38 PM CST
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I would like to beleive the last unicorn never dies.

Else hope and magic would depart the earth.
aint that the truth we al have to have sumthing to belive in or alls lost
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sassywoman
Houma, Louisiana USA
Posted: Oct 2, 2006, 5:49 PM CST
In response to:
"When The Last Unicorn Died."

A light was within the Unicorn. A light that gave forth warmth. A warmth that had power. The power to love.

Being alone the Unicorn's love lost its power.

The power of its love had no one to warm. The warmth of its power faded. The light within the Unicorn grew weaker each day.

One day the light went out and the Unicorn died.

"There Is No Magic Without Love."



By Rillyniceguy
Love can never die because GOD is love and He is everlasting. Besides that I may not have the love you seek but I do have love for you and always will so your unicorn hasn't died it is just taking a napwave laugh
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jasflint
collins, Georgia USA
Posted: Oct 3, 2006, 10:37 PM CST
The unicorn thrives in us.
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Unicorn777
Mystic, Connecticut USA
Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 6:43 AM CST
I AM THE UNICORN....AS ONLY LOVE CAN CREATE ME... AS ETERNAL AND POWERFUL AS LOVE ITSELF...FOR THAT IS WHAT I AM....

I'M ALIVE !
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beachfarmer
La Jolla USA
Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 6:56 AM CST
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I AM THE UNICORN....AS ONLY LOVE CAN CREATE ME... AS ETERNAL AND POWERFUL AS LOVE ITSELF...FOR THAT IS WHAT I AM....

I'M ALIVE !
Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack; Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare; Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water; Like me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.
--Hymn Of Buddha--wink
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Unicorn777
Mystic, Connecticut USA
Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 7:48 AM CST
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Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack; Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare; Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water; Like me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.
--Hymn Of Buddha--
Broken the heart of the Unicorn
Whose own begining has summond her end
Destined to wander alone in this world
Through deserts where Love should have been...

Her Spirit is cast of unearthly powers
Something this world's never known.
It's source and it's strength she harbors within
Is all that reminds her of home.

Her home is not here and she knows this.
Yet she serches in vain for a sign
In hopes that she may know what Love is.
It all seems so futile sometimes.

She belongs to the light of another world
Where the power of Love persists.
Yet she was born into this dimension
To prove that the other exists.

-Me-
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Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 7:52 AM CST
Even the Earth with all it's mass will stop rotating someday without energy applied to move it.

A man or woman no matter how strong will loose heart without love and just stop living.

By the path of fools does love become cheap and ugly.

The greatest love story will never be told. It is too precious to the ones who find it.
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Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 7:56 AM CST
So is that by chance based upon "The Last Unicorn" by Peter S Beagle?? The writing style fits his writing style perfectly.
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Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 7:59 AM CST
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So is that by chance based upon "The Last Unicorn" by Peter S Beagle?? The writing style fits his writing style perfectly.
No, I know nothing of poetry. I just write what comes. grin
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Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 8:01 AM CST
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No, I know nothing of poetry. I just write what comes.
Nonono.. its a book. And there is a movie out too. Check out the book-- you'll see the similarities.
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Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 8:03 AM CST
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Nonono.. its a book. And there is a movie out too. Check out the book-- you'll see the similarities.
Okee dokee!grin
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beachfarmer
La Jolla USA
Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 8:18 AM CST
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Broken the heart of the Unicorn
Whose own begining has summond her end
Destined to wander alone in this world
Through deserts where Love should have been...

Her Spirit is cast of unearthly powers
Something this world's never known.
It's source and it's strength she harbors within
Is all that reminds her of home.

Her home is not here and she knows this.
Yet she serches in vain for a sign
In hopes that she may know what Love is.
It all seems so futile sometimes.

She belongs to the light of another world
Where the power of Love persists.
Yet she was born into this dimension
To prove that the other exists.

-Me-
Be not broken in heart or antler
Or believe the summons or summoner
Or solitude a destiny pre-chosen
Certainly not that Love has a preferred climate

Harnessing spirit is a futility we all try
To learn the attempt is only a show of force
Power lay in letting go harboring strength
in release and a True sense of home

I too am just a passer through
Vulnerable to the trappings of vanity
Again futility being force and power
Found in surrender, for we are not seperate from love

Power, light, love,and dimension
Persist everywhere all the time
(for lack of a better term)
To prove existence, One only need "be"

-I-
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Jess642
Agnes Water Australia
Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 8:29 AM CST
In the end all that really matters is:

How well did you live?

How well did you love?

How well did you learn to let go?
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starliteisbrite
The planet earth....:), Ontario Canada
Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 8:32 AM CST
To love thee-self and to have the genuie love of others is all the richness we need.


To me lonely is a state of mind,there is to be alone,and then there is lonely......
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Unicorn777
Mystic, Connecticut USA
Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 11:45 AM CST
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Be not broken in heart or antler
Or believe the summons or summoner
Or solitude a destiny pre-chosen
Certainly not that Love has a preferred climate

Harnessing spirit is a futility we all try
To learn the attempt is only a show of force
Power lay in letting go harboring strength
in release and a True sense of home

I too am just a passer through
Vulnerable to the trappings of vanity
Again futility being force and power
Found in surrender, for we are not seperate from love

Power, light, love,and dimension
Persist everywhere all the time
(for lack of a better term)
To prove existence, One only need "be"

-I-
"for we are not seperate from love"

...There in lives the Truth.
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Random_Stranger
Made IN, California USA
Posted: Feb 8, 2007, 11:49 AM CST
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"When The Last Unicorn Died."

A light was within the Unicorn. A light that gave forth warmth. A warmth that had power. The power to love.

Being alone the Unicorn's love lost its power.

The power of its love had no one to warm. The warmth of its power faded. The light within the Unicorn grew weaker each day.

One day the light went out and the Unicorn died.

"There Is No Magic Without Love."



By Rillyniceguy
Was it a Rouge unicorn? Why do you suppose they are called Unicorn, when they don't have corn but a horn? I always thought they should be called Unihorn. I wonder who was drunk when they named them. Probably Adam. Which is why God showed no mercy when He kicked Adam's naked azz out the garden.
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