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Eternal Brook

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Eternal Brook

Posted: Apr 6, 2007, 7:15 PM CST
I am wind, I am rain,
I am joy, I am pain.

These roots that cling to soil,
Hold me fast to mortal coil.
Yet more am I besides this brook,
Eternal part that I mistook.
Brother river, tell me more,
Of Father Ocean, Mother shore,
I've forgotten, in my bed,
All the things my parents said.

I am wind, I am rain,
I am joy, I am pain.

Water flowing, heart and soul,
Eternity has taken toll.
Deja vu, is this true,
The reason why the sky is blue?
I think science the new mythos,
Arrogant and bellicose.
Shouting white in a world of grey,
Where the gods come to play.

I am wind, I am rain,
I am joy, I am pain.

Looking out, the insides change,
Pixies the furniture rearrange,
And what was true the day before,
Now is fancy, that naught restore.
Gone, what was, forever and a day,
Alas, even memory, by the way.
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native_grl38
Belleville Canada
Posted: Apr 6, 2007, 7:24 PM CST
In response to:
I am wind, I am rain,
I am joy, I am pain.

These roots that cling to soil,
Hold me fast to mortal coil.
Yet more am I besides this brook,
Eternal part that I mistook.
Brother river, tell me more,
Of Father Ocean, Mother shore,
I've forgotten, in my bed,
All the things my parents said.

I am wind, I am rain,
I am joy, I am pain.

Water flowing, heart and soul,
Eternity has taken toll.
Deja vu, is this true,
The reason why the sky is blue?
I think science the new mythos,
Arrogant and bellicose.
Shouting white in a world of grey,
Where the gods come to play.

I am wind, I am rain,
I am joy, I am pain.

Looking out, the insides change,
Pixies the furniture rearrange,
And what was true the day before,
Now is fancy, that naught restore.
Gone, what was, forever and a day,
Alas, even memory, by the way.


Very Nice...Thanx for sharing!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: Apr 6, 2007, 7:29 PM CST
Interesting...I liked ithandshake


Thankshere's to you
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Posted: Apr 6, 2007, 7:37 PM CST
Thank you both.

My muse gives thee a nod also.

Arrogant bitch that she is. sigh

Peace.

TET
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GypsyRi
Sikeston, Missouri USA
Posted: Apr 6, 2007, 8:08 PM CST
I liked it. It was nice. wave dancing dancing banana cheering , Enjoyed it,
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Thais1417
Sevilla, Andalucia Spain
Posted: Apr 6, 2007, 9:38 PM CST
Two sparrows, two youngsters
Are fighting -
Hardly know how to fly!
What is there so dear
That neither one would like to share:
A sparrow-girl, or seed, or fly?
* * *
First blood is shed-
It didn't cease the fight...
Each little brain knows:
He is right!
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