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How dare you???

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Jul 7, 2007, 6:50 AM CST
Desire sparks across the nerves
hot cobwebs on the skin
heart takes flight
and bounces back
eyes turn their gaze within
random swellings here and there
blood surges like a tide
breath falters
and then draws in
a rollercoaster ride
watch anticipation grow
all pulses throbbing deep
then a yawn
a slow goodnight
someone just goes to sleep!



Just back from pulling an all nighter so that would be me...good morning.
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lovemetendergrl
Omaha, Nebraska USA
Posted: Jul 7, 2007, 7:47 AM CST
I enjoyed your poem, reminds me of my wedding night. lol We were so tired by the time we reached the hotel at 3am that my ex fell asleep before I even got the wedding dress off. Talk about frustrating!hug
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rwantin
Costa Mesa, California USA
Posted: Jul 7, 2007, 8:57 AM CST
Good morning, and thank you.
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