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Watch the sinews of the hand
that shapes the word.
that wields the pen so lightly
writing down the margins
of the world
that does not yet exist
to comfort me.
No romance,
sweet like honey,
no butter on my bread
to ease it down,
just words
that fill the throat,
the mind, to paint
a picture of perfection
dark eyes, long hair
a subtle smile that
curves fine chiseled lips
with kisses
just a breath away
from heaven
all magic in the making
of the dreams I write
each night
to ease the passage
into lonely day
where romance scurries
out of sight around the corner
tied to someone else's dream,
my nightmare on awaking.

awww bajanblue.... I hope you really don't feel this way, but if you do come closer and let me hug you...
I hope this helps..

Hi Daniel, no I am actually quite mellow at the moment but thanks for the hugs. Hugs are always good!

I was just thinking about the thread on romance earlier and the request for cynical feedback and suddenly the words were there.

I actually meant to write about clouds because we had some stunning storm effects today. Oh well, there will be new clouds tomorrow.

I will patiently await for your stormy cloudly skies poem, Lady





That one was once again very well written!!!!! .... but to my understanding of romance ... Oh well! it doesn't have connection. Please forgive me ..... it seems i have a wee different perception of romanticism

Glad to hear it bajanblue, I hate it when anyone is down, but I am glad you are feeling ok... hugs anyway

I also have a different perception.

I was thinking of all the stereotypes we see on book covers, in the movies. Nothing like real romanticism at all.

I always revert to nature eventually so I hope you don't have to wait too long.

nature. Emmerson. Dickenson. True romantics. That's what i was getting at on my thread. read it, you'll see.

Capital 'R". I see.

? Capital "R"?

As in "Romanticism". The Romantic tradition in literature, rather than just every day romance.

Ah, my wit is diminished. I agree. "Everyday romance" would be a lot better if people threw capital R's around more often, though.

Daniel, your heart is filled with lots of wonderful things.

< "Everyday romance" would be a lot better if people threw capital R's around more often, though.>


Perfect jumping off point for a poem or a blog!

A letter enlaRged can be the seed, that blossoms then becomes a tree.

I thank you for the mental stimulation. Good way to close the day!

Beautiful

Excellent!