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As I lay in my bed

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As I lay in my bed

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israelit2003
Suffern, New York USA
Posted: Dec 12, 2007, 12:25 AM CST
As I lie on my bed, thinking about you, Dec 11, 2007 10:09 pm

I feel this strong urge to grab you and squeeze you,
because I can't forget last night.


You came to me unexpectedly during the balmy and calm night, and what
happened in my bed still leaves a tingling sensation in me.

You appeared from nowhere and shamelessly, without any
reservations, you lay on my naked body...

You sensed my indifference, so you applied your hungry
mouth to me without any guilt or humiliation, and you
nearly drove me crazy while you drained me.

Finally I went to sleep.

Today when I woke up, you were gone.
I searched for you but to no avail, only the sheets bore witness to last night's events.
My body still bears faint marks of your enthusiastic ravishing, making it harder to forget you.

Tonight I will remain awake waiting for you...


you freaking mosquito!

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CuspofMagic
Space/Energy---, Piedmont Italy
Posted: Dec 12, 2007, 12:32 AM CST
In response to:
As I lie on my bed, thinking about you, Dec 11, 2007 10:09 pm

I feel this strong urge to grab you and squeeze you,
because I can't forget last night.


You came to me unexpectedly during the balmy and calm night, and what
happened in my bed still leaves a tingling sensation in me.

You appeared from nowhere and shamelessly, without any
reservations, you lay on my naked body...

You sensed my indifference, so you applied your hungry
mouth to me without any guilt or humiliation, and you
nearly drove me crazy while you drained me.

Finally I went to sleep.

Today when I woke up, you were gone.
I searched for you but to no avail, only the sheets bore witness to last night's events.
My body still bears faint marks of your enthusiastic ravishing, making it harder to forget you.

Tonight I will remain awake waiting for you...


you freaking mosquito!

Great poem- Whats the title -The Bumps of the Night smile
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Borderman
Cold Spring, New Jersey USA
Posted: Dec 14, 2007, 12:55 PM CST
Very funny. I admit I was lured into your trap - your surprise ending.
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gandalf01
franklin, New Jersey USA
Posted: Jan 20, 2008, 5:35 PM CST
Excellent poem. It drew me in completely and fulfilled me all the way to it's surprise ending. Do you have any more like it?
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