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Letting go

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Letting go

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thegreeneyedbrat
Ridgecrest/China Lake, California USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 3:42 AM CST
the stroke of midnight... the hour of mystery and romance.....mark my sadness
the first rays of sun... the rays of awakening... mark my sorrow
the glow of the moon... its face full of peace and splender.... mark my loneliness
the harmony of the song.... the grace of its dance... mark the emptiness of my heart.

Once not so long ago, all these things held wonder for you and I...
Once bewitched us for many a day and night...
Once held us in in their knowing embrace....
Once nurished our love.

Not so long ago... the angels envied our love....
Not so long ago.... the flowers bloomed for us alone....
Not so long ago.... the birds sang for no one but us...
Not so long ago.... whe thought would be forever.

Then came the day.... the clock did not chime
Then came the day.... the sun died for me...
Then came the day.... the moon lost its wonder...
Then came the day.... the song came to an end.

why.... why does your heart beat no more...
why.... why does your eyes no longer shine....
why.... why do your lips no longer whisper my name
why.... why does this pain continue to burn in my soul.

why did you go
why did you not take me
why did you leave me here alone

The angels called your name...
the angels eased your pain....
the angels needed you more than I
the angels left me here to cry

If only I had but a minuet more....
I could have told you
I would have shown you
I would have begged
but no.... the call of the heavens you could not deny....

I pray to join you
I pray that you hear my calls
I pray that you hear my cries....
I pray for one more touch... one more kiss...

One day I will join you...
Untill then my love....
remember me fondly,
remember my embrace,
remember my kiss...
remember my love for you.

I strive to go on, healing as I grow....
knowing you'll watch over me as I go...
Lighting my path, guiding my way...
Helping me learn the lesson of letting go.

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gentlepaws
Any town, Ontario Canada
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 3:43 AM CST
May we help in the meantime ?
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sexophone
Gothenburg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 3:49 AM CST
In response to:
the stroke of midnight... the hour of mystery and romance.....mark my sadness
the first rays of sun... the rays of awakening... mark my sorrow
the glow of the moon... its face full of peace and splender.... mark my loneliness
the harmony of the song.... the grace of its dance... mark the emptiness of my heart.

Once not so long ago, all these things held wonder for you and I...
Once bewitched us for many a day and night...
Once held us in in their knowing embrace....
Once nurished our love.

Not so long ago... the angels envied our love....
Not so long ago.... the flowers bloomed for us alone....
Not so long ago.... the birds sang for no one but us...
Not so long ago.... whe thought would be forever.

Then came the day.... the clock did not chime
Then came the day.... the sun died for me...
Then came the day.... the moon lost its wonder...
Then came the day.... the song came to an end.

why.... why does your heart beat no more...
why.... why does your eyes no longer shine....
why.... why do your lips no longer whisper my name
why.... why does this pain continue to burn in my soul.

why did you go
why did you not take me
why did you leave me here alone

The angels called your name...
the angels eased your pain....
the angels needed you more than I
the angels left me here to cry

If only I had but a minuet more....
I could have told you
I would have shown you
I would have begged
but no.... the call of the heavens you could not deny....

I pray to join you
I pray that you hear my calls
I pray that you hear my cries....
I pray for one more touch... one more kiss...

One day I will join you...
Untill then my love....
remember me fondly,
remember my embrace,
remember my kiss...
remember my love for you.

I strive to go on, healing as I grow....
knowing you'll watch over me as I go...
Lighting my path, guiding my way...
Helping me learn the lesson of letting go.

crying , brings someone to mind,..... may her gentle soul rest in perfect peace.
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yoursuperman
Lynchburg, Virginia USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 4:04 AM CST
Strong words Brat ty for sharing that.. Does make you think of ones you lost ..

hug hug
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dcj22
Somewhere, Minnesota USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 4:09 AM CST
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Strong words Brat ty for sharing that.. Does make you think of ones you lost ..

I'm sureI'm not the only one that feels these words of yours for someone we've lost in our own lives.

danahug
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Daniel4021
Somewhere, Tennessee USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 5:05 AM CST
In response to:
the stroke of midnight... the hour of mystery and romance.....mark my sadness
the first rays of sun... the rays of awakening... mark my sorrow
the glow of the moon... its face full of peace and splender.... mark my loneliness
the harmony of the song.... the grace of its dance... mark the emptiness of my heart.

Once not so long ago, all these things held wonder for you and I...
Once bewitched us for many a day and night...
Once held us in in their knowing embrace....
Once nurished our love.

Not so long ago... the angels envied our love....
Not so long ago.... the flowers bloomed for us alone....
Not so long ago.... the birds sang for no one but us...
Not so long ago.... whe thought would be forever.

Then came the day.... the clock did not chime
Then came the day.... the sun died for me...
Then came the day.... the moon lost its wonder...
Then came the day.... the song came to an end.

why.... why does your heart beat no more...
why.... why does your eyes no longer shine....
why.... why do your lips no longer whisper my name
why.... why does this pain continue to burn in my soul.

why did you go
why did you not take me
why did you leave me here alone

The angels called your name...
the angels eased your pain....
the angels needed you more than I
the angels left me here to cry

If only I had but a minuet more....
I could have told you
I would have shown you
I would have begged
but no.... the call of the heavens you could not deny....

I pray to join you
I pray that you hear my calls
I pray that you hear my cries....
I pray for one more touch... one more kiss...

One day I will join you...
Untill then my love....
remember me fondly,
remember my embrace,
remember my kiss...
remember my love for you.

I strive to go on, healing as I grow....
knowing you'll watch over me as I go...
Lighting my path, guiding my way...
Helping me learn the lesson of letting go.

Very touching.. it reminds me of some things in my past.. truly moving.. thank you..hug
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Shadow_lover
West Palm, Florida USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 5:06 AM CST
Morning Danwaving santa
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Daniel4021
Somewhere, Tennessee USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 5:07 AM CST
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Morning Dan
morning Shadow...handshake
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FlowerOfTheSnow
Malaga, Andalucia Spain
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 6:29 AM CST
In response to:
the stroke of midnight... the hour of mystery and romance.....mark my sadness
the first rays of sun... the rays of awakening... mark my sorrow
the glow of the moon... its face full of peace and splender.... mark my loneliness
the harmony of the song.... the grace of its dance... mark the emptiness of my heart.

Once not so long ago, all these things held wonder for you and I...
Once bewitched us for many a day and night...
Once held us in in their knowing embrace....
Once nurished our love.

Not so long ago... the angels envied our love....
Not so long ago.... the flowers bloomed for us alone....
Not so long ago.... the birds sang for no one but us...
Not so long ago.... whe thought would be forever.

Then came the day.... the clock did not chime
Then came the day.... the sun died for me...
Then came the day.... the moon lost its wonder...
Then came the day.... the song came to an end.

why.... why does your heart beat no more...
why.... why does your eyes no longer shine....
why.... why do your lips no longer whisper my name
why.... why does this pain continue to burn in my soul.

why did you go
why did you not take me
why did you leave me here alone

The angels called your name...
the angels eased your pain....
the angels needed you more than I
the angels left me here to cry

If only I had but a minuet more....
I could have told you
I would have shown you
I would have begged
but no.... the call of the heavens you could not deny....

I pray to join you
I pray that you hear my calls
I pray that you hear my cries....
I pray for one more touch... one more kiss...

One day I will join you...
Untill then my love....
remember me fondly,
remember my embrace,
remember my kiss...
remember my love for you.

I strive to go on, healing as I grow....
knowing you'll watch over me as I go...
Lighting my path, guiding my way...
Helping me learn the lesson of letting go.

How beautifully written, sad and profound ... hug hug
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Dknew
Warner, New Hampshire USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 7:25 AM CST
Sad yet the ending speaks volumes.
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ArtHistorian
Mankato, Minnesota USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 7:31 AM CST
In response to:
the stroke of midnight... the hour of mystery and romance.....mark my sadness
the first rays of sun... the rays of awakening... mark my sorrow
the glow of the moon... its face full of peace and splender.... mark my loneliness
the harmony of the song.... the grace of its dance... mark the emptiness of my heart.

Once not so long ago, all these things held wonder for you and I...
Once bewitched us for many a day and night...
Once held us in in their knowing embrace....
Once nurished our love.

Not so long ago... the angels envied our love....
Not so long ago.... the flowers bloomed for us alone....
Not so long ago.... the birds sang for no one but us...
Not so long ago.... whe thought would be forever.

Then came the day.... the clock did not chime
Then came the day.... the sun died for me...
Then came the day.... the moon lost its wonder...
Then came the day.... the song came to an end.

why.... why does your heart beat no more...
why.... why does your eyes no longer shine....
why.... why do your lips no longer whisper my name
why.... why does this pain continue to burn in my soul.

why did you go
why did you not take me
why did you leave me here alone

The angels called your name...
the angels eased your pain....
the angels needed you more than I
the angels left me here to cry

If only I had but a minuet more....
I could have told you
I would have shown you
I would have begged
but no.... the call of the heavens you could not deny....

I pray to join you
I pray that you hear my calls
I pray that you hear my cries....
I pray for one more touch... one more kiss...

One day I will join you...
Untill then my love....
remember me fondly,
remember my embrace,
remember my kiss...
remember my love for you.

I strive to go on, healing as I grow....
knowing you'll watch over me as I go...
Lighting my path, guiding my way...
Helping me learn the lesson of letting go.

Beautifully written by a beautiful lady! Brought tears to my eyes as I remember one also.

Thank you for sharing this and letting me know it was here.

hug hug
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snowfire
hot springs, Arkansas USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 7:35 AM CST
Awesome. Still untangling my emotions. Thank you.
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mbcasey
North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 9:33 AM CST
I am sitting here sobbing like a baby. Thank you GEB for this beautiful and touching poem. I can't seem to let go myself. hug
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thegreeneyedbrat
Ridgecrest/China Lake, California USA
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 11:19 AM CST
To all the beautiful people that read my poem.... believe it or not, I was not sad when I wrote this... I was remembering all the good times my Jay (gone 1984)... I was inspired by a question the BeautifulEri asked me in another thread...
She asked me if I had ever been in love... Once a lifetime ago I had given my heart to someone only to have the Heavens call him home...
I can only pray that I will feel the joy of having that once more before I die...
I know I was directed to this sight for a reason...
So many people here know what I feel because they have been there themselves...
Thankyou for helping me let go....
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FlowerOfTheSnow
Malaga, Andalucia Spain
Posted: Dec 23, 2007, 11:25 AM CST
In response to:
To all the beautiful people that read my poem.... believe it or not, I was not sad when I wrote this... I was remembering all the good times my Jay (gone 1984)... I was inspired by a question the BeautifulEri asked me in another thread...
She asked me if I had ever been in love... Once a lifetime ago I had given my heart to someone only to have the Heavens call him home...
I can only pray that I will feel the joy of having that once more before I die...
I know I was directed to this sight for a reason...
So many people here know what I feel because they have been there themselves...
Thankyou for helping me let go....
I am very lucky in a way that the reasons I have "had to let go" of past loves" were different (if it can be called lucky) ...

You poem is so poignant though it brought tears to my eyes ...

You have my warmest wishes for you to meet the one who will once more make you feel loved and whom you will love back hug

angel
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