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Half Life

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Half Life

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Mar 20, 2008, 1:21 PM CST
Life turns on a dime
most days, and gives no change
but every now and then
the changes ring a carillon
above my head.
so loud the dead themselves
sit up, take note and start to talk.
I write pretty words
that sing of sunsets,
paint the golden path of dawn,
a tapestry of delicate delight
that hides the bitter neatly
in the sweet, enticing you
to come and play,
to wander in the gentle dreams,
illusions that I give away
and sometimes drown in
when the bones of truth
crush hard against
the endless moment
I inhabit
Sweet echoes of mortality
are drumming on the anvils in my head
and somewhere, buried deep
I find there is a yes and no
a stop and go,a walk, don’t walk
all dancing their duality
across the single page
I write on.
The sound of one hand
clapping is heard
by just one ear
and only one eye burns
with just one tear.
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Ambrose2007
Badger, South Dakota USA
Posted: Mar 20, 2008, 1:44 PM CST
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I was having some trouble wrapping my head around this poem, Bajan, perhaps because of the "duality" - heck, "triality" -- of it, but I did love the conclusion.

The sound of one hand
clapping is heard
by just one ear
and only one eye burns
with just one tear.

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KrazieStill
Bristol, Connecticut USA
Posted: Mar 20, 2008, 1:53 PM CST
Your writing is indescrible. Ever written songs? If this was made into a rap song, everyone would be living your words.

Okay, I'm off on a tangent. I just appreciate your writing. head banger
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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Mar 20, 2008, 2:22 PM CST
Ambrose2007 wrote:
I was having some trouble wrapping my head around this poem, Bajan, perhaps because of the "duality" - heck, "triality" -- of it, but I did love the conclusion.

The sound of one hand
clapping is heard
by just one ear
and only one eye burns
with just one tear.


I was thinking out louder than usual, fighting a demon or three.wave
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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Mar 20, 2008, 2:26 PM CST
KrazieStill wrote:
Your writing is indescrible. Ever written songs? If this was made into a rap song, everyone would be living your words.

Okay, I'm off on a tangent. I just appreciate your writing.


Thank you, I'm pleased you like it. I appreciate your feedsback. A couple of song writers have used a phrase or two of mine, but I would need a collaborator for songs.wave
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Jackson
Powell, Tennessee USA
Posted: Mar 20, 2008, 2:47 PM CST
Superb, lady, positively superb! (Of course it is, since YOU wrote it!!) We continue holding you in our hearts and prayers. May God's angels hold you tightly as you travel this unfamiliar path.

-J (& Don, too)

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Ambrose2007
Badger, South Dakota USA
Posted: Mar 20, 2008, 3:19 PM CST
bajanblue wrote:
I was thinking out louder than usual, fighting a demon or three.


Thinking "out louder"...! rolling on the floor laughing I'll have to remember that one, D (and I already made a reference to your poem in another thread - the part about the clapping of one hand requiring one earthumbs up laugh)

May Dionysus and his angels (maeneds?) keep you safe and secure on your journey in his unholy bossom, Bajan.blushing wave
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