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Dedicated to V;D and A because I read your posts

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Dedicated to V;D and A because I read your posts

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 9, 2008, 8:09 AM CST
tears chimed silver tracks
down cheeks all wrinkled
with emotion
heart, no longer lonely,
clenched its fist
around the joy
of being loved
of being missed
of being serenaded
I struggle at the moment
as parts of me
go their own way
as panic pushes to get past
good commonsense
not that i have much
of that, words were pretty
more important to me
so i collected them
instead of 'deep browm
anchor me to earth
thoughts' that don't let me
spread the wings I dream
i have for sun to shine through
painting rainbows, shedding flecks
of moondust, starlight all across
the many faces of the world.
Yet commonsense will help me now
as words will not, did not,
will wrap me gently in a blanket
to lead me quietly to shelter
till the storm is done. And part of me
will rage because it loves a challenge
and part of me will smile and walk away.
The battles on my field for once
are more important to me
than riding to the rescue with support
that is not needed and probably not wanted
on a field so full of mud all the faces are the same.



Verthandie,I was putting myself out of temptation's way for a bit. I have no plans to close my account here.

DogmaI didja really do it????yay

Joanie thanks.

Um I only read three posts and them the words hijacked me here....teddy bear
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joanie04984
North Woods, Maine USA
Posted: Apr 9, 2008, 9:26 AM CST
"on a field so full of mud all the faces are the same"

Wow, powerful and apt description hug
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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 9, 2008, 9:30 AM CST
joanie04984 wrote:
"on a field so full of mud all the faces are the same"

Wow, powerful and apt description


wave I snuck through the metaphor line twicedevil

Hope you have a good one.
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Ambrose2007
Badger, South Dakota USA
Posted: Apr 9, 2008, 10:25 AM CST
I loved that last line, D!wave applause hug
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DogMaI
Sartell, Minnesota USA
Posted: Apr 9, 2008, 11:24 AM CST
bajanblue wrote:


DogmaI didja really do it????



laugh Nope....dunno just thinking of youwink laugh

Glad to see you back... wave hope the time off did you some good
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Verthandi
Augusta, Maine USA
Posted: Apr 9, 2008, 9:42 PM CST
Welcome back. blushing I am glad it was a short vacation.
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