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There will be day

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There will be day

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 4:34 AM CST
Will I slide off the edge,
just tumble into darkness
if I watch the sun go down,
or is night there
with open arms
to catch me, set me
on my feet to dance with stars
to wrap myself in moonlit clouds,
a glamour seen as comet trails
below, as my barefeet
kick little clumps of heaven loose
to rain as meteors.
The sunset sun is red, it
mirrors blood, more human
than the eldritch glory of
eyescarring sunrise
and I want to shelter
from the knowledge
light demands I face,
embrace, and drown in.
Dawn frightens me
this morning.
The six tastes on my tongue
are all the story
I have written with my days
and I must read the whole
in just one fragment
spinning out of my control
while night's gentle hands
release me
to the vivid real of day.
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allmylove
newdelhi India
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 4:42 AM CST
my divine kisses
god bless u
urs
little princehug
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trish123
Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 4:59 AM CST
bajanblue wrote:
Will I slide off the edge,
just tumble into darkness
if I watch the sun go down,
or is night there
with open arms
to catch me, set me
on my feet to dance with stars
to wrap myself in moonlit clouds,
a glamour seen as comet trails
below, as my barefeet
kick little clumps of heaven loose
to rain as meteors.
The sunset sun is red, it
mirrors blood, more human
than the eldritch glory of
eyescarring sunrise
and I want to shelter
from the knowledge
light demands I face,
embrace, and drown in.
Dawn frightens me
this morning.
The six tastes on my tongue
are all the story
I have written with my days
and I must read the whole
in just one fragment
spinning out of my control
while night's gentle hands
release me
to the vivid real of day.


hug sad flower hug
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joanie04984
North Woods, Maine USA
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 5:47 AM CST
hug
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Verthandi
Augusta, Maine USA
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 5:49 AM CST
The night is always there to set the world right, if only for the next day. hug
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kurzita
Xaghra, Gozo Malta
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 5:55 AM CST
It is the nature of the journey we are all on.

Lots of love.

And may your God be with you.

bouquet of flowers bouquet of flowers bouquet of flowers
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X5323601
Fairbanks, Alaska USA
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 6:06 AM CST
thumbs up
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Scottishlass
Knoxville, Tennessee USA
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 6:09 AM CST
Good morning all teddy bear and thank you for your beautiful combination of words Bajan.
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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 6:32 AM CST
Good morning.

Thanks for the comments everyone, wave conversing kiss
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Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 8:06 AM CST
Beautiful.
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DizzyDi
Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 10:40 AM CST
That is realy beautifullsad flower bouquet of flowers
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Posted: Jun 23, 2008, 12:18 PM CST
this one has stuck in my head

i love to be touched in this way
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irishlass45
Texas USA, Texas USA
Posted: Jun 23, 2008, 12:22 PM CST
You are beautiful, and deep and profound................was wondering if reverie got you again, i see you wonwine hug
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wolfpack
post falls, Idaho USA
Posted: Jun 23, 2008, 12:23 PM CST
bajanblue wrote:
Will I slide off the edge,
just tumble into darkness
if I watch the sun go down,
or is night there
with open arms
to catch me, set me
on my feet to dance with stars
to wrap myself in moonlit clouds,
a glamour seen as comet trails
below, as my barefeet
kick little clumps of heaven loose
to rain as meteors.
The sunset sun is red, it
mirrors blood, more human
than the eldritch glory of
eyescarring sunrise
and I want to shelter
from the knowledge
light demands I face,
embrace, and drown in.
Dawn frightens me
this morning.
The six tastes on my tongue
are all the story
I have written with my days
and I must read the whole
in just one fragment
spinning out of my control
while night's gentle hands
release me
to the vivid real of day.

Very beautifulyay
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Ambrose2007
Badger, South Dakota USA
Posted: Jun 23, 2008, 1:20 PM CST
It's so good to see your poetic self again, Bajan! Though that poem was a bit of a emotional rollercoaster ride for me.help
wave hug kiss
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Arlene101
Cape Breton Island, Nova Scotia Canada
Posted: Jun 23, 2008, 2:00 PM CST
Ambrose2007 wrote:
It's so good to see your poetic self again, Bajan! Though that poem was a bit of a emotional rollercoaster ride for me.
I am in awe of you , Bajan! The way you can express yourself through words. I have been reading your blog and may you always be blessed as we are to have you.teddy bear hug
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Ambrose2007
Badger, South Dakota USA
Posted: Jun 23, 2008, 2:41 PM CST
Arlene101 wrote:
I am in awe of you , Bajan! The way you can express yourself through words. I have been reading your blog and may you always be blessed as we are to have you.


Thanks for that, Arlene. "Blessed" is precisely the right word - at least for what D brings us!cheering

I think your blog just may be changing my life, Bajan.hug kiss
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gingerb
Letterkenny, Donegal Ireland
Posted: Jun 23, 2008, 3:05 PM CST
Your courage in facing each new day with it's attendant fears, never fails to astound me Bajanblue. Your poetry fills my heart.hug
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gorgeous4_u
Paola, Majjistral Malta
Posted: Jun 23, 2008, 3:05 PM CST
bajanblue wrote:
Will I slide off the edge,
just tumble into darkness
if I watch the sun go down,
or is night there
with open arms
to catch me, set me
on my feet to dance with stars
to wrap myself in moonlit clouds,
a glamour seen as comet trails
below, as my barefeet
kick little clumps of heaven loose
to rain as meteors.
The sunset sun is red, it
mirrors blood, more human
than the eldritch glory of
eyescarring sunrise
and I want to shelter
from the knowledge
light demands I face,
embrace, and drown in.
Dawn frightens me
this morning.
The six tastes on my tongue
are all the story
I have written with my days
and I must read the whole
in just one fragment
spinning out of my control
while night's gentle hands
release me
to the vivid real of day.
:


That was very nice thumbsup:
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Arlene101
Cape Breton Island, Nova Scotia Canada
Posted: Jun 24, 2008, 5:11 AM CST
Ambrose2007 wrote:
Thanks for that, Arlene. "Blessed" is precisely the right word - at least for what D brings us!

I think your blog just may be changing my life, Bajan.
I am living in the in the Cancer Capital of the world according to the media. I have had cancer three times. I am reading to my friend-'Bajan's Blog' and she actually cried and told me to tell her more when she was ready. Lillian is one tough lady and refused to get sick until she called me one night and said she was sick and was scared and asked to come to her place. Of course!!!! I Was there within ten minutes. In all seriously, Bajan, it touched my 'tough' friend's heart. Trust me--YOU will get through this. My friend -Lillian- is just stariting to get some stubble on her head, yay We all will be doing 'YAY' after your treatment. I worked 'Pallitive Care" for years and I know about the halutionations ( sic?). Bajan---You WILL come through this because you have better Doctors than we will ever have. Love your journals, I dealt with the people and been there and done that---BUT- your blog is definitely an insight for the people who don't understand the disease. I LOVE you Lady for expressing yourself to the world and showng people what it is like. Please don't worry--YOU WILL SURVIVE!!!! If the dummy doctors in Canada can do it --then you are all set. I Will be watching for you . Most sincerely, Arlene.hug bouquet of flowers
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