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Crucible

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Crucible

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 7:36 PM CST
Night pulses heat
skin gleams, and trickles
light trapped in a tear
perhaps in sweat;
a pearl beside the corner
of an eye, half-closed
against the salt,
harsh crystals
on soft skin, on lashes
tangled by the storm
just past, all damp with rain
with tears, with sweat
with being where they are.
Reality has faded
smoky remnants of a memory
drift over parted lips
that maybe shape the name
of love gone by
or conjure up tomorrow's dream
too early.
Dreams die in heat,
lie tattered behind eyelids
too heavy to be lifted
to let them breathe and flower
into castles in the air,
in spain or anywhere light
splinters into rainbows
through unspilled tears
that wash an eye, half-closed
against the unseen future.
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Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 7:42 PM CST
Fab work, Bajan...



2 thumbs up





thanks
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gingerb
Letterkenny, Donegal Ireland
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 7:47 PM CST
If you're not published you should be. Your poems are wonderful.thumbs up
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CuspofMagic
Windmill thrills, Castilla-La Mancha Spain
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 7:52 PM CST
--- or Australia yay --- Fantastic! Bayan

--- and closed eyelids- open- to light for within darkness - lives light - within light there is no darkness-- even on the stormiest day greet the new sun
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Scottishlass
Knoxville, Tennessee USA
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 7:55 PM CST
thumbs up applause love it.
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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 8:02 PM CST
Hi Red, Ginger, Magic!

Thank you for the feedback.hug wave conversing
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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 8:03 PM CST
Scottishlass wrote:
love it.


Welcome back! Glad you hear your eyes are all good! Was just beginning to worry about where you were yesterday.wave
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X5323601
Fairbanks, Alaska USA
Posted: Apr 11, 2008, 8:14 PM CST
Wonderful wine
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joanie04984
North Woods, Maine USA
Posted: Apr 12, 2008, 6:28 AM CST
wine
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trish123
Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
Posted: Apr 12, 2008, 6:59 AM CST
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DizzyDi
Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
Posted: Apr 12, 2008, 7:06 AM CST
teddy bear thats lovely
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constanza
Los Angeles, California USA
Posted: Apr 12, 2008, 8:07 AM CST
dropping jaw applause
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Zellarrone1
Hull, Humberside, England UK
Posted: Apr 12, 2008, 8:59 AM CST
I thought this poem was about Crucible theatre in York where the snooker is being held next week D'oh!

Good poem though wine which I dedicate to Paul Hunters memory rose sad flower crying
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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 12, 2008, 10:00 AM CST
Zellarrone1 wrote:
I thought this poem was about Crucible theatre in York where the snooker is being held next week

Good poem though which I dedicate to Paul Hunters memory


Your comments are the best. who is Paul Hunter... I could google I suppose!
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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 12, 2008, 10:02 AM CST
Hi to x53, joanie, Trish, DizzyDi, Constanza.

Thanks for reading. Hope I didn't miss any one (Trying to be a well behaved OP!)wave conversing
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Zellarrone1
Hull, Humberside, England UK
Posted: Apr 12, 2008, 10:08 AM CST
bajanblue wrote:
Your comments are the best. who is Paul Hunter... I could google I suppose!
Hi Bajan wave Ohh, it was a quite localish snookerplayer who passed away 2 years ago at aged 27 from colon cancer, just as he was making it famous. My son goes to this event every year and it was one of his favourite players. He also said he was a really nice person too, even when he was really ill he would stand and talk to the fans for ages. He was really cute looking too, and also left behind a wife and baby, It was just too sad but life goes on of course rose
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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados
Posted: Apr 12, 2008, 10:12 AM CST
Zellarrone1 wrote:
Hi Bajan Ohh, it was a quite localish snookerplayer who passed away 2 years ago at aged 27 from colon cancer, just as he was making it famous. My son goes to this event every year and it was one of his favourite players. He also said he was a really nice person too, even when he was really ill he would stand and talk to the fans for ages. He was really cute looking too, and also left behind a wife and baby, It was just too sad but life goes on of course


That's for darn sure! I hope your son enjoys the event!wine
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class
LONDON, Outer London, England UK
Posted: Apr 17, 2008, 11:52 AM CST
memories and hopes and snatched dreams,
half formed hopes and anxieties for tomorrow

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