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Moon Lunacy


Let mystical, mica-glistening
effervescent moonlight lead your rhythm crazy.

Dance drunkenly, soul a whistling
whip-a-diddle tunes, till everything's gone hazy.

Dream of skipping, dewdrop sipping,
wind a nipping, skinny dipping
on a lunar night.

On a lunar blue night when the moon is bright.
When everything we do is good
and every moment right.

Waltz wantonly in the bubbling
beams alight with mist, so feet no longer ground you.

Lie languidly, tenderness troubling
pores aflush with fire, let lymphic glow surround you.

Dream of tripping, cartwheel flipping,
bedpost gripping, nightshirt ripping,
on a lunar night.

On a lunar blue night when the moon is bright.
When everything we do is good
and every moment right.

Not as good at this as Bajanblue, but making an attempt.......

Its fabulous honey...

Its hard to write feelings into words, sometimes they corrupt but the heart beckons....
Poetry is a beautiful expression that should be shared..

Don't tell anyone, but I like it better than mine.

Moon madness, passion and beauty all caught in a rhythm that makes me want to laugh out loud and dance!

Thank you.

Zarah and Bajanblue thank you so much for your kind words. They give me encouragement for future attempts.

Don't ever stop...
Poetry is not only a means by which to explore your own journey of self discovery...it can move us to reflect on our own personal experiences and speaks the truth in all our lives, as the pebble resonates in ever enlarging circles...

This has a lovely rhythm and pace, read it out loud to a friend and they loved it too.

So glad you enjoyed it, thank you for taking the time to read it.

Your posts even sound like poetry.

Ha! no I leave the words to you....I paint acrylics, ....work as a doctor just so I am not the impoverished artist but I guess thats the expectation for artists....creativity connects me to sanity time.

What genre of painting are you into? I dabble in all sorts of painting and sculpture myself. It is easy to understand your need for creativity when you are dealing with life and death problems every day.

Hark! someone mentioned a moon again? I heard the call, thank you for sharing that, very different like upbeat poetry, cool

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Gingerb, this is very well done. I like the tempo and the images that the words conjure up.

Glad you liked it

what a charming "whip-a-diddle tune"

The pleasure was all mine

What you do have girl is TALENT and it is all yours how fab is that..big pat on the back for a beautiful poem....thanks for that..