Love is...

bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:08 AM CST

Love is just a spiral of sensation
starting in a thought,
blinking through bedazzled eyes
breathing past lips
choking on a name
locked in the throat,
pausing in the lungs,
beating pounding throbbing
in the heart, the blood, the
shaky knees that take
a timid step
toward reality,
the warmth, the hope, the beauty of it
then retreat
back to the dream where
love is just a spiral of sensation.

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mindfful
--, Missouri USA

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:11 AM CST

ouch
now im sad

hi BB
i love you

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:13 AM CST

mindfful wrote:

ouch
now im sad

hi BB
i love you

'Morning!

Reality has sharp edges to let us know we are alive!

Love ya!

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kurzita
Xaghra, Gozo Malta

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:14 AM CST

Aaahhhhhh.....Love.....

That which all of us crave....

it comes when it wants....

grabs u by the throat....

and lifts u higher....

to where it wants.....

when it wants.....

to disrupt your normality...

and just as quickly hammers u to the gorund....

to leave u dazed in a tornado of unexplained sensations....

which will never be forgotten....

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:16 AM CST

kurzita wrote:

Aaahhhhhh.....Love.....

That which all of us crave....

it comes when it wants....

grabs u by the throat....

and lifts u higher....

to where it wants.....

when it wants.....

to disrupt your normality...

and just as quickly hammers u to the gorund....

to leave u dazed in a tornado of unexplained sensations....

which will never be forgotten....

tornados sweep the dust
away from explanations
leaving love the mystery
it was always meant to be.

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Scottishlass
Knoxville, Tennessee USA

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:17 AM CST

bajanblue wrote:

Love is just a spiral of sensation
starting in a thought,
blinking through bedazzled eyes
breathing past lips
choking on a name
locked in the throat,
pausing in the lungs,
beating pounding throbbing
in the heart, the blood, the
shaky knees that take
a timid step
toward reality,
the warmth, the hope, the beauty of it
then retreat
back to the dream where
love is just a spiral of sensation.

Beautifully expressed

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gingerb
Letterkenny, Donegal Ireland

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:18 AM CST

You've certainly captured the endless split seconds of it in this piece. I was almost holding my breath reading it...........and remembering..................

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kurzita
Xaghra, Gozo Malta

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:21 AM CST

One will ALWAYS remeber love.

Thank u Bajan.....

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:24 AM CST

gingerb wrote:

You've certainly captured the endless split seconds of it in this piece. I was almost holding my breath reading it...........and remembering..................

"endless split seconds of it.." lovely phrase. You could build palaces of love on that!

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mindfful
--, Missouri USA

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:33 AM CST

kurzita wrote:

Aaahhhhhh.....Love.....

That which all of us crave....

it comes when it wants....

grabs u by the throat....

and lifts u higher....

to where it wants.....

when it wants.....

to disrupt your normality...

and just as quickly hammers u to the gorund....

to leave u dazed in a tornado of unexplained sensations....

which will never be forgotten....

swetie?
of course its just my opinion....
but im a bit uncomfortable w/ you quantifying normality

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mindfful
--, Missouri USA

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:34 AM CST

besides i dont crave love i crave stovies
and i spent 2 hrs in a bathtub during tornado last week

a 15 yr old and a daschsund on top o me

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Bowie
winter haven, Florida USA

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:37 AM CST

I love reading your poetry, but it always leaves me wanting.

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kurzita
Xaghra, Gozo Malta

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:37 AM CST

mindfful wrote:

swetie?
of course its just my opinion....
but im a bit uncomfortable w/ you quantifying normality

Normality......

a matter of perception...

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fireliter
Allen Park, Michigan USA

Posted: May 5, 2008, 8:49 AM CST

having the sensations of wanting to love, being loved,yes even missing loved one,or becoming melancholy from time to time of a love lost is...... NORMAL

this is my perception of normal.

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Ambrose2007
Badger, South Dakota USA

Posted: May 5, 2008, 9:33 AM CST

bajanblue wrote:

Love is just a spiral of sensation
starting in a thought,
blinking through bedazzled eyes
breathing past lips
choking on a name
locked in the throat,
pausing in the lungs,
beating pounding throbbing
in the heart, the blood, the
shaky knees that take
a timid step
toward reality,
the warmth, the hope, the beauty of it
then retreat
back to the dream where
love is just a spiral of sensation.

Hmmmmmm....some spiral, Bajan, some spiral....

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados

Posted: May 5, 2008, 10:03 AM CST

mindfful wrote:

besides i dont crave love i crave stovies
and i spent 2 hrs in a bathtub during tornado last week

a 15 yr old and a daschsund on top o me

Once upon a time there was a tornado full of love very puzzled by the fact that no matter how hard he tried, no one would accept the love he offered. He twisted and turned hither thither and yon, trying to share the love to no avail. Finally his life just spiralled out of control and he joined a dating site.

He met a dust devil and they lived happily ever after.

The end.

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mindfful
--, Missouri USA

Posted: May 5, 2008, 10:29 AM CST

bajanblue wrote:

Once upon a time there was a tornado full of love very puzzled by the fact that no matter how hard he tried, no one would accept the love he offered. He twisted and turned hither thither and yon, trying to share the love to no avail. Finally his life just spiralled out of control and he joined a dating site.

He met a dust devil and they lived happily ever after.

The end.

oh no you didnt!

youre killin me

crp i gotta sign out
for real

but fire
sooo serious today *teehee*

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados

Posted: May 5, 2008, 10:42 AM CST

Ambrose2007 wrote:

Hmmmmmm....some spiral, Bajan, some spiral....

And the music goes round and round...

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bajanblue
Speightstown, Saint Peter Barbados

Posted: May 5, 2008, 10:43 AM CST

mindfful wrote:

oh no you didnt!

of course I did!

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trish123
Lancashire, England UK

Posted: May 5, 2008, 10:45 AM CST

bajanblue wrote:

Love is just a spiral of sensation
starting in a thought,
blinking through bedazzled eyes
breathing past lips
choking on a name
locked in the throat,
pausing in the lungs,
beating pounding throbbing
in the heart, the blood, the
shaky knees that take
a timid step
toward reality,
the warmth, the hope, the beauty of it
then retreat
back to the dream where
love is just a spiral of sensation.

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