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Just something out of my blog

http://wolfarino.blogspot.com/

I hate love poems.

So I should write an anti-love para or some sort of bitchy thing I guess.

To start with, I am sick to death with “How soft are her lips”, “The curve of her hips”seriously. Why the fuck would I want to hear about fallacies you build up in your head............just that cause you can write it in your little black book to show your friends ? Pretending you’re some great poet.

This world is filled with billions of topics, inflation, terrorism, politics, murder, rape, war, vandalism or at least for crying out loud "RAP MUSIC" and yet Nine times out of ten amateurs with their books of words and rhyming dictionaries chose to write about an emotion, a fear of loneliness and simply some fucking stupid love story they don't have an idea about.

“Her golden hair”,
“Her innocent stare”,

I can’t take it anymore.One at a time, you march onto stage, and squint in the glaring spotlight as you smile at the faceless, dark audience and pour out your thoughts on love.

With all the unbearable bad rhyming and questionable syncopation arrrhhhhhhh... bloody Poem after poem after poem

“I feel his hands upon my neck”,
“When you’re gone I am a wreck”,

And I sit here, in front of my laptop and wish with every single bone in my body and going past the bones and wishing with every inch of myself that I would never get to read single one of those lame ass love poems.

But, :-(

I must write and for my self one of these days and see if it suits up ;)

This is something from your blog??????? If that's the case then why do you feel its necessary to repost it here? Truly, I could not done without your drivel.

or verbal diarrhoea

yep

My bad then !

Hey, spare me a rib.

Just new and walked in here last afternoon

Come on waste of time to even discuss....

Well somebody has to say something positive here!!!

It's a good piece of writing whether it came from your blog or not.

You have a real talent in expressing yourself. The sentiment is valid and worth discussing I think.


There are too many love peoms out there and I often wonder why people can't get passionate in poetry about other subjects. Is it because they are limited to some clasic Byron or Shelly or Wordsworth that they learned at school, and can't see it as a means for expressing ordinary subjects not classified in the realms of idealism?


Welcome to CS by the way.

As you can see, we are a mixed bunch........

I agree, your writing talent is commendable, but you chose the wrong place to vent, probably best left on your blog. There are a lot of poets on this site & what you wrote could be quite offensive.

Yes, there are a lot of love poems out there, among other poems of sentiment & feeling.

Basically because people can only write about what they know & there are a lot of lovers/broken hearts/dreamers in the world. If you don't like what they write you have the choice to look elsewhere, you don't have to read anything.

People do get passionate about more than love, and poetry is as diverse as the people of the world. Look further & you may just find something you like......

JMO

btw

I wrote a poem here called "the roses have lost their scent"

Not about love!!

I was talking generally as I usually do on here. No offense meant to anyone who writes on other subjects or are sensitive about their love poetry.

I write both myself, ( about love and other subject matter).

I was just trying to be fair to a young man who came on here, and as is often the case, maybe, didn't know what to post, but wanted some means of talking to other people.

He just got pounced on in no uncertain terms and it wasn't right.

We don't all say profound things when we first post on here, nor are we all crowd-pleasers. Give the man a chance..............

All the love poems make me want to also

“I feel his hands upon my neck”,
“When you’re gone I am a wreck. <-- These couple of lines weren't too bad though, they seem like parts of a "pain is pleasure gothic poem". No wonder she felt a wreck after he'd tried to strangle her

I have to agree...although, I occasionally write about love...I am more familiar with other things, so that is what I write about.

I think love poems are overimaginative.

I have never tasted lips that tasted like wine!!

I have never seen stars in someones eyes

I would not swim acoss the ocean for someone nor walk across the desert.

Hell, I wouldn't even spend $500 on a plane ticket!!

I'm sure you've learned to be a little less 'lame ass combative' now ..

people write how they feel and from what they know, demeaning them (rather than the type of poetry itself) doesn't garner much support for how you feel as you may have noticed. Objectivity is best in criticism..

Well, well, well.

Isn't this interesting?
To the OP you have no clue what I'm talking about do you?

Here's a little ditty for you to enjoy my good man.

There was an old man from Kent
Had a D___ so long that it bent
to keep his wife out of trouble
he went in on the double
and instead of cummin he went

As you can see I'm in a rare mood today.

A very RARE mood indeed

hi zella...don't get upset .....i'll send you a sweet and nice love poem

I'm just reading it now you wrote that one quick for me or did you steal someone elses poem and put your name on the end instead

<-- Needs 2 give myself 2 pats on my own head after reading that one

meeee.....never do such things



how are u geting today swee lady? and were you yesterday ?