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zhkhan88 Torino, Piedmont Italy
I have written an essay for undergraduate scholarship but i don't have much experience like to check my essay like professors or advisers. Because they know the psychology of their colleagues (Professors/scholarship team)

Thats why i want to take advice before submitting my essay...

I am applying for Bachelor of science in Environmental Architecture. My essay is for scholarship purpose expressing why do you feel, you are a good candidate for a scholarship and how will this scholarship help you to achieve your goal?

So if you are thinking to help my scholarship essay. Leave me a message and i will send you my written Essay. Then you can make correction/editing.

I will be thankful to you for this kindness.
riyablossom somewhere .. , Pennsylvania USA
so sorry .. i cant find anyone to edit mine even ..dunno
trish123 Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
I'll check them for you both if you like - at least I can give suggestions for english usage and if i pick up on anything else, we can discuss it - I do my cap and gown ceremony next week - cant wait to get the photos....



livinglarge in a good place , Kildare Ireland
trish123: I'll check them for you both if you like - at least I can give suggestions for english usage and if i pick up on anything else, we can discuss it - I do my cap and gown ceremony next week - cant wait to get the photos....
Congratulations Trish applause applause applause
Hugz_n_Kissez Someplace, Ontario Canada
trish123: I'll check them for you both if you like - at least I can give suggestions for english usage and if i pick up on anything else, we can discuss it - I do my cap and gown ceremony next week - cant wait to get the photos....



WOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO....You'll have to put some pics on your profile so we can see them doll....wink applause cheering applause hug teddybear bouquet yay
trish123 Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
Im so excited - it is on the 14th - then i will officially be able to put Trish BA when I sign anything - even though its social sciences, social sciences are considered an 'art' hahahaha - wish i could do it all again though and get B S'c - theres not that much difference really, the research methods are the same as those used in the practical sciences - its just a societal/academic thingy.......
Hugz_n_Kissez Someplace, Ontario Canada
trish123: Im so excited - it is on the 14th - then i will officially be able to put Trish BA when I sign anything - even though its social sciences, social sciences are considered an 'art' hahahaha - wish i could do it all again though and get B S'c - theres not that much difference really, the research methods are the same as those used in the practical sciences - its just a societal/academic thingy.......



Yeah I bet you are excited darlin...and you should be...that's a lot of hard work behind you!!!!!!


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mastic55 Long Island, New York USA
I got a little problem to and cant get anybody to look at it.rolling on the floor laughing
trish123 Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
Well....... I have to admit, its something of an achievement - we have a thing here called an access course which is for older learners to gradually fold themselves into academia but....... when I signed up for this course, they figured I could do it without that access thing cos had done a couple of months of the access thingy a few yrs before - they were so wrong and it was totally so hard for me to get my head round - it was the struggle of all struggles in my entire life, it even took my mind of the direst of grief situations - and yet,,,,,,, Im here to tell the tale - hahaha, a couple of weeks and there will be some brill piccies to relate the tale.........
Hugz_n_Kissez Someplace, Ontario Canada
trish123: Well....... I have to admit, its something of an achievement - we have a thing here called an access course which is for older learners to gradually fold themselves into academia but....... when I signed up for this course, they figured I could do it without that access thing cos had done a couple of months of the access thingy a few yrs before - they were so wrong and it was totally so hard for me to get my head round - it was the struggle of all struggles in my entire life, it even took my mind of the direst of grief situations - and yet,,,,,,, Im here to tell the tale - hahaha, a couple of weeks and there will be some brill piccies to relate the tale.........



Well I'm proud of ya doll...and I hear ya about the school thing...I worked my arse off for 2 years straight and it was the toughest course at the college I went to...but I graduated with good marks...and it was well worth it...but I remember the nights with no sleep...2 kids to look after and 6 exams in one week to study for...near nervous breakdown stuff!!!!!!!!!!

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trish123 Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
I hate exams with a vengeance - good on you for getting through what must have been one hell of a week teddybear bouquet hug hug hug wave
morgan5 somewhere sunny , Canarias Spain
Good luck to you handshake
trish123 Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
a guy, the husband of our psychology tutor, said in private conversation with me one day "why the hell did you do that course, you would have been better doing physics" - thats about the best measure i can come up with for how bloody happy i am that that whole thing is over with........
trish123 Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
morgan5: Good luck to you


Hello Morgan, lovely to see you stranger hug
morgan5 somewhere sunny , Canarias Spain
trish123: Hello Morgan, lovely to see you stranger
Hi trish hug look in but just not posting as much, hope your well
trish123 Lancashire, Lancashire, England UK
Top of the world me thanks Morgan - hope all is as good for you wave hug




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