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kurt37 manitowoc, Wisconsin USA
Sat Jan 10, 2009 12:26 PM CST : shadows
all around , i can hear the sound

haunting footsteps drawing near

i know what they seek.

oh these thorns in my side

continueing on

they follow along,gaining on me

fiercly staring upon me

whispering in my ear

coming closer , reaching ever so near

sitting alone

as the shadows are finally here
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kurt37 manitowoc, Wisconsin USA
Sat Jan 10, 2009 8:14 PM CST : shadows
what do you guys think of my poem ?
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Mercedes1 Sydney, New South Wales Australia
Fri Jan 16, 2009 5:54 PM CST : shadows
It sounds like the aliens are coming for you!
But its written from within so thats what counts!
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