Thread:

The Unexplained...

Category:
Poetry, Quotes, Writing
page: 1 2 of 2

The Unexplained...

Florida matchmaking
carebear01
Mt. Dora, Florida USA
Posted: Jan 26, 2008, 10:06 AM CST
Why can't we choose to love one another?
Does it have to be one or the other?

A tiny speck in this world we live in,

Fading away...

At the end of the day...

Like the pages of an open book, yet written...

We refuse to look, beyond our own...

"Dare to ask why"


Karrie Anne





Wanted to share this...
Just some of my ramblings...
blushing teddy bear

Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Inverness personals
dingo
Inverness, Florida USA
Posted: Jan 26, 2008, 12:58 PM CST

Well carebear, that was very nice rambling. anytime you feel like rambling, you just go ahead and do so....comfort
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
US singles
ronjie
Daytona Beach, Florida USA
Posted: Jan 26, 2008, 4:00 PM CST
carebear01 wrote:
Why can't we choose to love one another?
Does it have to be one or the other?


This almost sounds like a song I heard on the radio, don't remember who sang it.

carebear01 wrote:
A tiny speck in this world we live in,

Fading away...

At the end of the day...

Like the pages of an open book, yet written...

We refuse to look, beyond our own...

"Dare to ask why"

Karrie Anne

Wanted to share this...
Just some of my ramblings...



Ramble on.... Ramble on... don't stop now... :)
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Florida matchmaking
carebear01
Mt. Dora, Florida USA
Posted: Jan 28, 2008, 9:06 PM CST
Hmmm...

Straight from my mind sweetie...
Maybe I should think about writing music.
Interesting thought...
confused wink
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Inverness personals
dingo
Inverness, Florida USA
Posted: Jan 28, 2008, 9:59 PM CST


dont just think it...do it..!! you are off to a good start.yay
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
US singles
ronjie
Daytona Beach, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 6, 2008, 2:47 PM CST
Hear hear!
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Florida matchmaking
carebear01
Mt. Dora, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 8, 2008, 8:13 PM CST
ronjie wrote:
Hear hear!


Thank you for your support...
thumbs up hug

You too Dingo...
hug
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Inverness personals
dingo
Inverness, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 9, 2008, 2:22 PM CST

ANY-TIME...carebear.....wave
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Florida matchmaking
carebear01
Mt. Dora, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 12, 2008, 7:04 PM CST

I wrote this for a special friend tonight.
Wanted to continue sharing...


Sometimes...


Sometimes I sit and wonder where you are.
A ghost in the night, never to be seen by the light?
Silence creeps in like a soft breeze taking in all that is good.
What have you done today in your brilliance?
A kind word perhaps, for an unsuspecting soul.
Quietly I wait to hear your words echo across my ears.
Is it you? I hope so....

Karrie Anne



Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
US singles
ronjie
Daytona Beach, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 14, 2008, 8:53 AM CST
Keep going.....

I believe we have a budding artist here.... :)
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Inverness personals
dingo
Inverness, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 15, 2008, 1:51 PM CST

Now that must be one special friend!!! I was truly moved..very nice carebear..blushing
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Florida matchmaking
carebear01
Mt. Dora, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 15, 2008, 4:07 PM CST

Thank you...



Stained Glass...


Blue is the color so vivid so true,
of the pain she sheds before you.
Where is her heart today, she who is kind?
Hidden by the tears of her clouded mind?
At a glance, look through her, see her pain.
Quietly, she stands alone, stained.


Karrie Anne




Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
US singles
ronjie
Daytona Beach, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 15, 2008, 11:08 PM CST
carebear01 wrote:
Thank you...
Stained Glass...Blue is the color so vivid so true,
of the pain she sheds before you.
Where is her heart today, she who is kind?
Hidden by the tears of her clouded mind?
At a glance, look through her, see her pain.
Quietly, she stands alone, stained.Karrie Anne


Well, you started with blue... what color do you to from here? :)

Ron V.
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Florida matchmaking
carebear01
Mt. Dora, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 19, 2008, 4:39 PM CST
I'm a rainbow, didn't you know?
grin


My most recent, not what you're use to but
poetry comes in many forms.

False Friends...

How silently the heart breaks.
Torn apart by cowards and fakes.
Merely seeking to devour the kind.
So selfish, close minded, and blind.
Thoughts of their needs their desire.
Paving the way to become just a liar.
Stand and judge yourself in the mirror.
Now, can you see others much clearer?
Facing what you have truly become.
Heartless, selfish, greedy, and numb.

Karrie Anne


You are far from false my friend...
handshake hug


Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
US singles
ronjie
Daytona Beach, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 19, 2008, 8:54 PM CST
Rainbow is good ( skittles... ;) )

But this poem really sounded downright black.... go back to rainbow :)
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Inverness personals
dingo
Inverness, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 20, 2008, 9:39 AM CST
Just read some more of your work carebear...very nice!! keep it up it makes me think about diffent parts of life..some good, some bad.
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Florida matchmaking
carebear01
Mt. Dora, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 20, 2008, 3:51 PM CST
dingo wrote:
Just read some more of your work carebear...very nice!! keep it up it makes me think about diffent parts of life..some good, some bad.


Yes exactly hon...

Life is imperfect so expressions will fall into
every crack along the way.thumbs up

Ronjie I'm still a rainbow on the inside dear.
Just experience life along with the rest of the
world. All that matters is what is truly on the
inside even though the road is rough
sometimes, right? dunno wink
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
US singles
ronjie
Daytona Beach, Florida USA
Posted: Feb 21, 2008, 12:31 AM CST
carebear01 wrote:

Ronjie I'm still a rainbow on the inside dear.
Just experience life along with the rest of the
world. All that matters is what is truly on the
inside even though the road is rough
sometimes, right?


Yeah... I hearya....
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
Florida matchmaking
carebear01
Mt. Dora, Florida USA
Posted: Mar 28, 2008, 6:03 PM CST

Empty...

Quiet, the sound of nothing
Repetitive the life seeping into my lungs.
Could it be? The faint sound of a heartbeat.
Alas, comfort within my own darkness.


Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
US singles
ronjie
Daytona Beach, Florida USA
Posted: Mar 28, 2008, 7:24 PM CST
carebear01 wrote:
Empty...

Quiet, the sound of nothing
Repetitive the life seeping into my lungs.
Could it be? The faint sound of a heartbeat.
Alas, comfort within my own darkness.


I can almost resemble that...

I can see that as saying, " Look for happiness within yourself, you won't find it outside of you."
Is this post offensive? If so, Report this post »
page: 1 2 of 2

Report this thread if it breaks rules, is offensive, or contains fighting. Staff does not know about forum abuse (and cannot do anything about it), unless you tell us about it. If this thread is offensive, please click here to report it »

If site dates and times do not show correctly, you can fix this by editing your timezone
Click here to edit your timezone »