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As the sun goes down, and the dawn is near,
Im waiting for you, hoping the message is clear,

I dream of your touch, being held in you embrace,
If I close my eyes I can see your smiling face.

time stands still, the warmth we feel together,
this moments not lost, lets hold this forever,

Verse 1

Sitting here on a warm summers night
Wondering when I will find love
Someone to hold my hand and guide me through the storm
To soothe this aching heart of mine
I've waited for so long, trying to stay strong
Waiting for that some one special to come along
With a glint in their eye that will make me feel high
Has that someone come along, I don’t know
Only in time, my heart will let me know


Chorus

So please, give me a reason, give me a sign
These feelings I have will never run out of time,
this moment is near, can feel it so strong,
what can I dooo, to make it rightttt and not wronggggg
I guess, take the risk, and see how we get along.
If your not the one for me then I'll have to try move on
But somewhere deep inside my heart hopes that its you
I want to share all the good, the bad, the old, the new
And I want to share it all with you!


Verse 2

As the sun goes down, and the dawn is near,
I’m waiting for you, hoping the message is clear,
I dream of your touch, being held in you embrace,
If I close my eyes I can see your smiling face.
Time stands still, the warmth we feel together,
This moments not lost, lets hold this forever.
So take my hand and I will walk with you...
Believe me when I tell you just how I feel,
Its nto a dream that we are living, its all real.

Chorus:

The past stands still, the futures for us all,
lets get there together and support us if we fall (ughhhh getting like a poem) (needs title, melody, structure)

hard to do that through typing!!

Well its a love song of sorts

How about "Lost in Love" as a title.
Structure is 3-4 verses 4 Cho,

Melody, ammm some tune that people could hum as they read.

Like that song "im all out of love" what am i..... that kinda melody, or Def Leopard - Pour Some Sugar on Me, uhh in the name of .....


Ok so i never be a song writer, but this is going like a poem hahaha

rigth well so far "Lost in Love" has 2 verses and a Chorus!!

Melody ...hmmm....I dunno ...maybe we can just make a really really long love story poem!! haha!

Oh I'm all emotional after reading / singing that its lovely copyright it quick before someone robs it.
Alls we need now is someone to sing it for Saturday night

JIM???? OH JIM WHERE ARE YOU??

The song can be our secret password for Saturday night so we'll know each other

Yeah secret password "LOST IN LOVE"

thats very good ..havnt been here since fri daughter dancing in all ireland,
can you imagine the bouncer if we come up and say " lost in love"
he wouldn't let ya in....

That really came out good, I started reading it and was trying to figure out who wrote it. It does most certainly work as a poem and if the music was put to it, it would work as a song. can anyone sing?

Unfortunately as soon as it's up here the copyright belongs to CS.

I have millions of songs written - all lovey dovey ones!! No shock there!! hahah!!

Verse 1

Sitting here on a warm summers night
Wondering when I will find love
Someone to hold my hand and guide me through the storm
To soothe this aching heart of mine
I've waited for so long, trying to stay strong
Waiting for that some one special to come along
With a glint in their eye that will make me feel high
Has that someone come along, I don’t know
Only in time, my heart will let me know

Chorus

So please, give me a reason, give me a sign
These feelings I have will never run out of time,
this moment is near, can feel it so strong,
what can I dooo, to make it rightttt and not wronggggg
I guess, take the risk, and see how we get along.
If your not the one for me then I'll have to try move on
But somewhere deep inside my heart hopes that its true
I want to share all the good, the bad, the old, the new
And I want to share it all with you!

Verse 2

As the sun goes down, and the dawn is near,
I’m waiting for you, hoping the message is clear,
I dream of your touch, being held in you embrace,
If I close my eyes I can see your smiling face.
Time stands still, the warmth we feel together,
This moments not lost, lets hold this forever.
So take my hand and I will walk with you...
Believe me when I tell you just how I feel,
Its not a dream that we are living, its all real.

Chorus

So please, give me a reason, give me a sign
These feelings I have will never run out of time,
this moment is near, can feel it so strong,
what can I dooo, to make it rightttt and not wronggggg
I guess, take the risk, and see how we get along.
If your not the one for me then I'll have to try move on
But somewhere deep inside my heart hopes that its true
I want to share all the good, the bad, the old, the new
And I want to share it all with you!

I'm afraid of letting you in before we have even met
But thats what happens when you meet someone on the net......
Just try and be patient and jus give it time
Its all I'm asking and then you'll be mine.............

Chorus

So please, give me a reason, give me a sign
These feelings I have will never run out of time,
this moment is near, can feel it so strong,
what can I dooo, to make it rightttt and not wronggggg
I guess, take the risk, and see how we get along.
If your not the one for me then I'll have to try move on
But somewhere deep inside my heart hopes that its true
I want to share all the good, the bad, the old, the new
And I want to share it all with you! With you!

And the future is ahead like none of us planned,