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Sonnet VI – Slowly I Fall

Author: habs360

Touch my world softly, so gently caressed.
Give to me nothing, but what you desire;
Spare me a whisper, and set me afire.
You are an angel to this I’ll attest.

All that I am is as I have confessed.
You are the air and the life I require.
Wind in the trees and that which is higher.
You’re all of my dreams as I have expressed.

To take from me now what you have bestowed,
Would tear out my heart, and cripple my soul,
While damming my love, a river that flowed.

So please hear my words, of this I am owed.
Your words they are knives, and taking their toll.
As slowly I fall while visions corrode.

© 2003

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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:45 PM CST

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swade777 Grants Pass Area, Oregon USA
Wed Aug 12, 2009 11:17 PM CST
Very artistic!!! Great poetic communicative presentation!!!
You're a teacher of poetry I presume?
habs360 San Jose, California USA
Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:10 AM CST
Thank you very much for your compliment, but no, I am not a teacher. Just a simple scribe.
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QuietStormF Southern Ontario, Ontario Canada
Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:11 AM CST
Amazing words.. amazing poetry.. love it!teddybear
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aware3 navarre, Florida USA
Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:13 AM CST
I enjoyed reading this poem, the depth of emotions in the words, work magic within the rhymes. Very beautifully written, please check out some of mine, I would appreciate the feedback. Blessings, I look forward to reading more. aware3applause
habs360 San Jose, California USA
Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:17 AM CST
Thank you both very much.
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