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"tender pleasures"4

Author: Bentlee

looking into his eyes. . . . mimed c'mere on her lips. . . . . slipping up on her skin. . . . hushed I want you now as she crosses her feet. . . . intense eyes suddenly shared embraced in love with a passionate stare, slowly they move as everything's felt, their breath is excited, their hands holding tight, quivered body an light gasp's, her hands on his waist, echoed kisses shared, strong hands on her back then one finger paints her face as they share in tender pleasures . . . . .

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Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 4:49 PM CST

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andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Thu Aug 27, 2009 4:52 PM CST
Bentlee u r wearing me out....lol. Seriously though, truly excellent
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QuietStormF Southern Ontario, Ontario Canada
Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:46 PM CST
Very nice Bentlee..The way you write it,it's like I'm there..smitten hmm.. Time to take a cool dip.... heart beating
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:11 PM CST
Lol ah too much Andrew, ty sir poet lol:)
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:15 PM CST
Q S now there's a thought:) glad you like it looks like your hearts beatin fast lol.
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amahlala Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:22 PM CST
They just keep getting better and better! Whew!
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:25 PM CST
Hey Ama, it's like readin a book an waitin for the pages to turn lol:)
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amahlala Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:38 PM CST
Well then....write the next page! lol
sshore Hyderabad India
Sun Oct 18, 2009 5:41 AM CST
just like a book!
thankyou
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:19 AM CST
While writing this series I really wanted it to be reader friendly yet strong in passion. Ty sshore glad you enjoyed it.
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jazzy75 Houston, Texas USA
Sat Oct 24, 2009 11:33 PM CST
Bentlee, wow! beautifully writtencartwheel cartwheel
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