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Piece of cake

Author: CuspofMagic

“Familiar, ancient wheels turn into curs ed, well-worn ruts
Jagged tongues lick sandcastles in the sky
savouring unfathomable satiety

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Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 8:35 PM CST

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amahlala Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Thu Aug 27, 2009 9:34 PM CST
Intriguing...will have to think more on it.....
bestat45 saint john, New Brunswick Canada
Thu Aug 27, 2009 9:36 PM CST
a powerful poem. nicely written
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CuspofMagic Crystal City, South Australia Australia
Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:22 AM CST
--- Thankyou
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Mon Aug 31, 2009 8:34 PM CST
Very cool read ty, better yet, how it was written cheers
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CuspofMagic Crystal City, South Australia Australia
Mon Sep 7, 2009 9:05 PM CST
--- wine
gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Wed Sep 9, 2009 9:44 AM CST
I had to read till the end to understand what your poem was about
CuspofMagic.You've expreesed it in a brilliant manner
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Shewolf55 Columbia, South Carolina USA
Wed Sep 9, 2009 3:51 PM CST
So very deep. Thanks for sharing. handshake
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CuspofMagic Crystal City, South Australia Australia
Wed Sep 9, 2009 7:33 PM CST
Thankyou handshake
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