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"first time"

Author: Bentlee

i saw you. . . . I paused as my feet stilled, I had to catch up to my thoughts, I'd look away n back again, seemed we were motionless, pasted to timeless thought, I saw an innocence in your smile, candle of life in your eyes, honey laden skin on your face, a host of light embraced your presence, she's beautiful inside an out, you hadn't noticed how you captured my thoughts an stilled my feet the first time I saw you ~ Bentlee

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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:03 AM CST

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amahlala Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:19 AM CST
Another great poem!
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Polarbutterfly Somewhere, Northwest Territories Canada
Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:35 AM CST
Beautiful.Thanks for sharing. hug
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QuietStormF Southern Ontario, Ontario Canada
Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:44 AM CST
Wow, it's beautiful Bentlee... Just love findng surprises from you under the poetry tree... *big smile* Thanks......teddybear
gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:24 AM CST
Very nice poem bentlee.hug
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:51 PM CST
Ty Ama:) glad you enjoyed
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:53 PM CST
Hi P B ty for your comment:)
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:55 PM CST
hugs Q S i'm glad you liked it, thats what I thought the first time I saw you:)
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:56 PM CST
Hello Gypsy, ty :)
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poetengineer riyadh Saudi Arabia
Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:11 PM CST
really beautiful poem , i feel her really capture ur thoughts and soon i think she will put u in the love jail , thanks for ur share
andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:25 PM CST
thankyou bentlee, it says so much more than the few lines there, the kind of thing i like, andrew.
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