wicked games
Author: elsewherewhen i think of you part of me dies to know you love me no more the eyes never lie you lead me on with your wicked lies and still never once did i cry you've made me stronger i know you care for me no longer my faith is restored knowing one day true love will walk through my door until we meet again only the angels in heaven will smile again
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 3:05 AM CST
About this poem:
this poem is about being lied to and mislead i forgive her for that and will try to forget i know what comes around goes around i think she does to everything comes full circle
This is a really beautiful poem. :]
She must have really hurt you. :[
My only critique is it being bunched up together.
Try and separate it a little more like the style I'm doing now.
:]
courage
Morgantown, West Virginia USA
Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:28 AM CST
Elsewhere, I love your poem. I am sorry, for I can feel your pain, I hurt for you, my friend. If I could, I would take it away and make things all better. Give yourself time to heal. As you know, keep praying. God will send you the perfect lady at the perfect time in your life. I will be thinking of you and praying for you too. Hang in there, it will get better with time. You are a strong man. God Bless You! Peace and Hugs!
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Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:44 AM CST
thanks courage it may not seem like it but i am over her time took care of the hardest part sometimes i do think about her then realise she's not thinking of me that's just life yours words to me make me feel better knowing theirs people like you out their that care about people god bless you this is a dark poem but it happens to the best of us i believe i will meet my angel one day when i least expect it i'll keep believeing i wish you happiness and good luck to courage prayers and hugs back to you always god bless
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Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:08 AM CST
hello atheists9086 theirs more than one of you just joking thanks for saying my poem is beautiful it's true she hurt me bad good learning lesson i probably shouldn't forget this is the way i write im not changing it i couldn't if i wanted to everyone has a different style i understand what your saying though i can accept positive criticism it's my computer not me god bless and good luck