In the Heat
Author: Shewolf55In the heat of the day
nothing moves but my dreams.
For it cannot.
All is quiet around the house
and nothing bad shall disturb me.
For it cannot.
In the quiet heat of today
I will think of no one but you.
For I cannot.
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Posted: Tue Sep 8, 2009 10:04 AM CST
About this poem:
Loving thoughts.
© Copyright 2009. All rights reserved.
HotrodLarrys
Gower, Missouri USA
Tue Sep 8, 2009 10:33 AM CST
amahlala
Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Tue Sep 8, 2009 11:17 AM CST
Thank you for sharing this...I could feel the emotion.
Shewolf55
Columbia, South Carolina USA
Tue Sep 8, 2009 11:26 AM CST
Thank you both. Sometimes in our summer heat I am doing good if I can just think so I'm pleased that I could express the love for others to share.
andrew149
Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Tue Sep 8, 2009 3:57 PM CST
good words simply put, well written, thankyou. andrew.......xxx
gypsyheart
Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Wed Sep 9, 2009 6:31 AM CST
Very nice poem once again Shewolf55
Skybow
apple valley, California USA
Wed Sep 9, 2009 7:07 AM CST
This is beautiful, I love the minimalism and soft flow. There is great emotion expressed here. Love it!
Shewolf55
Columbia, South Carolina USA
Wed Sep 9, 2009 12:35 PM CST
Thank you Andrew, Gypsy and Skybow for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate you giving me your time.
boyshchrm6
barrie, Ontario Canada
Wed Sep 9, 2009 6:56 PM CST
I like the way your poem inicates
such conviction.
Shewolf55
Columbia, South Carolina USA
Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:08 AM CST
Thank you Boy for feeling the love. I put all of my heart and mind into my love.