Broken
Author: QuietStormFA framed print upon your wall..
A still shot of the two of us..
Sitting close together, on a bench,
Near the falls..
And to the casual observer..
I'm sure we must have seemed the perfect pair
But if you look a little closer..
If you took the time to ponder..
The naked eye..
You'd see a picture of me without you..
A broken picture in a broken frame..
And if you look a little closer..
You'd see just a broken frame.
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Posted: Tue Sep 8, 2009 10:09 PM CST
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trurorob
Alicante, Valenciana Spain
Wed Sep 9, 2009 4:22 AM CST
a broken heart in a broken frame Quietstormf we hope they can all be mended in this life, very nice poem, one of your best I feel so much depth in so few words
Rob
QuietStormF
Southern Ontario, Ontario Canada
Wed Sep 9, 2009 4:34 AM CST
Thanks Rob..
boyshchrm6
barrie, Ontario Canada
Wed Sep 9, 2009 5:05 AM CST
QuietStorm:A lot said and yet so elegantly.
Excellent QS
andrew149
Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Wed Sep 9, 2009 5:23 AM CST
thankyou QSF, eloquent, in thought, within broken frame is always new clean slate, waiting to be writ!......Andrew...xxx
QuietStormF
Southern Ontario, Ontario Canada
Wed Sep 9, 2009 5:35 AM CST
Thank-you Andrew...a new clean slate.. what an optimistic thought.. thanks...I hope so..
gypsyheart
Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Wed Sep 9, 2009 5:49 AM CST
A beautiful poem from your pen again QuietStormF
QuietStormF
Southern Ontario, Ontario Canada
Wed Sep 9, 2009 6:19 AM CST
Thank-You Gypsyheart.. and this one so true..
poetengineer
riyadh Saudi Arabia
Fri Sep 11, 2009 4:23 PM CST
i want to thanks ur beauty mind and ur wide imagination who show us this beautiful true words , thanks for share