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Author: RachaelC101Does a damaged soul
seek the soul
that is equally as
damaged?
Is it our natural natural
instinct to self destruct?
Do we seek our glory
in causing mayhem and menace?
Can't the world slow down?
-let us move at our own pace.
Then may be we'll find
the right one
at the right time
in the right place.
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 11:01 AM CST
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 11:42 AM CST
The stuff lacks the Muse.
gypsyheart
Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:53 PM CST
I like your poem RachaelC101
QuietStormF
Southern Ontario, Ontario Canada
Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:57 PM CST
Very nice poem Rachel..and wise words as well...
RachaelC101
Cork, Cork Ireland
Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:05 PM CST
thanks a mill guys...was a big thing for me to post the stuff i write so really appreciate ur comments....
QuietStormF
Southern Ontario, Ontario Canada
Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:15 PM CST
It's very well written Rachel.. and I'm so glad that you decided to share!
gypsyheart
Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:25 PM CST
Keep writing RachaelC101-its really nice work and never wrong to express your emotions or what you've experienced.Glad you decided to share
3point
Windsor, Ontario Canada
Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:47 PM CST
Thx for the share hun
Declan83
West, Sligo Ireland
Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:07 PM CST
Yes!
i really like it!
Sunnn
Valletta, Majjistral Malta
Fri Oct 9, 2009 9:55 AM CST