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Walking along the shore!

Author: jerseygirl49

I walked the shore, along the sand. This beautifull place, was given to man.
I walked along the edge of the water,for life is so long,and i've only lived a quarter.
Walking in further, up to my knees,I feel the cold chill of the deep blue sea.
Walking in further up to my thighs,for love and affection, unheard went my cries.
Life is so cold, like the water i stand,people too cruel, to lend me a hand.
Walking in further ,up to my waist,the times we've spent will now be erased.
Walking in further up to my shoulders,of living in life, i'm one of the holders.
Walking in further, up to my ears,the pains deep inside but my eyes shed no tears.
Walking in further, covering my eyes,i no longer see, or hear peoples cries.
Walking in further over my head,for life was so hard, but now i am dead.

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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 7:03 PM CST

About this poem:
Oh boy...same time frame,around the age of 16. I suppose i may have been alittle suicidle, but dont remember,feeling THAT bad. (hind site) i suppose.Anyway...i'm much happier today.
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poetengineer riyadh Saudi Arabia
Wed Sep 23, 2009 7:14 PM CST
wow , beautiful words , as always u have sweet words to share , but really this one is very thoughtful , thanks for u
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jazzy75 Houston, Texas USA
Wed Sep 23, 2009 10:06 PM CST
jerseygirl49 - intense emotion beautifully expressed.bouquet
gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:27 PM CST
A beautiful heart touching poem it is.At 15/16 the world can seem like a cruel place...jerseygirl49hug bouquet
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maverick6732 Richmond, Virginia USA
Wed Sep 30, 2009 9:25 PM CST
The same ability it takes to love so deep makes one morn as deeply when it dies. You have a deep and caring heart Jerseygirl, it shows in your words and sentiment.

Well written and fortunately the end was fiction.

The world is better with you in itteddybear
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jerseygirl49 Petersburg, Virginia USA
Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:54 AM CST
Thank you gypsy,jazzy,poetengineer,and maverick, for looking at my poem, and saying such sweet words.wave teddybear sad flower
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boyshchrm6 barrie, Ontario Canada
Sun Oct 25, 2009 12:22 PM CST
Excellent words from the heart of a young girl.
Truly nice and its good you are still here JG.cool angel applause angel crying angel crying
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Neostylites Kermanshah Iran
Tue Nov 10, 2009 5:42 PM CST
Are we really happier today, with these old hearts of ours that destroy and regenerate us never-endingly? Thanks Heavenly Jersey Girl for sharing this intensely passionate experience of your early youth. Though bitter, yet it's so beautiful!
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jerseygirl49 Petersburg, Virginia USA
Tue Nov 10, 2009 7:41 PM CST
Yes Neo, I am happier today, though never to be the same again!Thank you for viewing my poem,and your comments are always appreciated...JGcheers teddybear
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