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~Last Leave . . . . to Fall~

Author: Bentlee

orange embered sky fixated upon sweet harvest moon, fluent fall wind echoe's gossip filled leaves, through tha air cross ground they've let their tree go, chatter away in blown piles some stay some blow, yellows red oxide rust green brown silver orange, colage 3d form some are cup shape some get edge worn, wind spun cross lakes an atop river's crick's an stream, rudder'd stem in rigor form tells it's tale as now fall's once again ~

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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 6:41 PM CST

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ohio19 Dayton, Ohio USA
Tue Sep 29, 2009 6:51 PM CST
very good i like ithandshake
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MrAnonymous Boise, Idaho USA
Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:45 PM CST
There's something about this time of year isn't it?

Painted beautifully. Good write thumbs up thumbs up
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:47 PM CST
:) ty Ohio, it's comments like yours that keep us writin, is what we do eh:)
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amahlala Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:55 PM CST
Thank you for letting me see the fall!
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:06 PM CST
One a my favourite times a the year, is the start of the rebirth where an when all gets another chance to start all over again an make it better than it ever was. ty mr anonymous:)
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:31 PM CST
Ama with pleasure my friend, it's abound here this time a year. Out my back door's a painted scape a all all i've wrote except the water, it's jus down the road:)
gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Wed Sep 30, 2009 11:00 AM CST
Beautiful picture that i can see through your words Bentlee again.Thank you hug
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poetengineer riyadh Saudi Arabia
Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:33 PM CST
always beautiful nice words u have to share here , thanks for u
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Wed Sep 30, 2009 5:41 PM CST
Gypsy maybe you can put it to canvas lol. ty for your thoughts.
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Thu Oct 1, 2009 5:12 AM CST
Ty for your thoughts an comment Khaled. It's also good to see you back writing again:)
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