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FRIEND

Author: aware3

Say friend, don't I know you ?
You've been, around here before.
But, now come to think of it,
I can't place, just who you are.

But you sure seem so familar,
Say now, don't you know me ?
Yeah, friend I'm sure I know you,
So, tell me who could you be ?

Or, maybe you just remind me,
of an old pal of mine.
Someone, I have needed,
to talk with for sometime.

But he doesn't want to hear,
what I've got to say.
So, he tries to ignore me,
hoping that, I'll just go away.

And say friend, I must tell you,
You're not looking that well.
Not, to put you down friend,
But, you're looking like hell.

See how your hands keep shaking,
while you're holding that glass.
Friend, you sure could use a shave,
and when have you eaten last ?

Hey friend ! can't you hear that bartender,
shouting it's closing time ?
I would call us a cab,
But, you've spent our last dime.

You just, keep sitting here drinking.
Don't you care, about nothing else ?
Please friend can't you look at me... I'm talking.
Or can't you bear, to even... take a look at yourself ?

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Posted: Wed Oct 7, 2009 1:43 AM CST

About this poem:
This poem/song just came together, after seeing a drunk, having a conversation with himself in a bar mirror. It made me a lil sad, at the time. aware3
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boyshchrm6 barrie, Ontario Canada
Wed Oct 7, 2009 7:37 AM CST
Very well described.
Sad society we live in.cool angel thumbs up
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HelenOfTroy Athens, Attica Greece
Wed Oct 7, 2009 9:01 AM CST
Excellent poem - so sad.
andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Wed Oct 7, 2009 9:21 AM CST
thankyou....I think this is very well observed and reported, on a very hard subject....a good read!........andrew.....xxx
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aware3 navarre, Florida USA
Wed Oct 7, 2009 5:08 PM CST
Thanks! it was hard to write, for many reasons. I didn't write it to judge those poor tortured souls, they do that to themselves over n over ! Only to shed some light on how easy it might b to literally lose sight of our own selves. Blessings to all, and again THANKS 4 ur comments ! aware3 teddybear
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poetengineer riyadh Saudi Arabia
Wed Oct 7, 2009 5:33 PM CST
as always u have beautiful imagination , and really i effect with read it , thanks for ur beauty mind
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aware3 navarre, Florida USA
Fri Oct 9, 2009 1:00 AM CST
Thanks Poet-engineer, How r U ?, I just saw ur comment, I just got through editing it, 4 I had copied it late, n later found my re-write on it. Blessings, n I love all ur stuff as well ! aware3teddybear heart wings
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