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~within the flames~

Author: Bentlee

danced fire upon air, shuffled dirt imprinted of mocc, summoned spirit in elder filled chant, praise of life collective soul's demon'd spirits good one's fight, of the land of the night of the breath n tribal right, cultured past in conflicted way ever present here this day, danced foot an fire will not tire collective souls now aim higher, n in the face of the flames inspired elder thought, a culture past . . . . to present day~

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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:51 AM CST

About this poem:
Speaks for itself here.
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Comments

andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Sat Oct 10, 2009 9:04 AM CST
It certainly does my friend, and wonderful it is too....thankyou.....andrew
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Sat Oct 10, 2009 10:44 AM CST
Ty Andrew for your comment an your continued support in my writing. It means alot to me. Cheers my friend:)
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poetengineer riyadh Saudi Arabia
Sat Oct 10, 2009 2:35 PM CST
thanks for this wonderful words , my mindful writer
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Sat Oct 10, 2009 3:29 PM CST
Khaled i truly enjoyed writing this one as I wrote it I also lived in it too:) ty my friend.
sshore Hyderabad India
Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:34 AM CST
i find this one so very magical the quality the imagery
thankyou for sharing and bless you.
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:55 AM CST
ty sshore i like your comment very much, yes it is sort of magical in its wayhug
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jazzy75 Houston, Texas USA
Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:30 PM CST
Bentlee, this is a really cool poem. I like it very much :-)
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Bentlee trenton, Ontario Canada
Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:42 PM CST
thanks Jazzy for your comments, I'm happy you enjoyed this as much as I did writing ithug
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