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Forbidden Love

Author: Shortstack_15

Loving this, isn't something I should do,
Shouldn't want to spend my time in taboo.
I should try to be strong,
but it's the right kind of wrong.

This might be a mistake I'm maken,
But given waht it does, I'm happy to be taken.
Nothing's ever made me feel like this,
just holding the blade is near bliss.

They say it's something I should do with out,
but they dont know what goes on when the lights go out.
There's no way to explain,
All the pleasure is worth all the pain.

I should try to run, but I just can't seem to,
'Cause everytime I try to run, it's what I run to.
Cant do without, what it does for me,
The blood tells me I'm free!

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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 7:13 PM CST

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Comments

trurorob Alicante, Valenciana Spain
Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:05 AM CST
cleverly written my friend
Rob
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poetengineer riyadh Saudi Arabia
Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:32 PM CST
u have good skill in using words , thanks for u
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boyshchrm6 barrie, Ontario Canada
Tue Oct 13, 2009 6:40 PM CST
"right kind of wrong" love that.
Well writtencool angel applause
gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Tue Oct 20, 2009 9:47 AM CST
Very well written with strong expressed emotions Shortstack_15.I think i know what your poem is abouthug bouquet
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Shortstack_15 Taintor, Iowa USA
Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:05 PM CST
Thanks for the kind thoughts/responses.
yay
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ecm1013 Pocola, Oklahoma USA
Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:00 AM CST
Nice flow.
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IvoryPetals new york, New York USA
Thu Dec 3, 2009 1:28 AM CST
All i can say is wow. You're very talented.
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Shortstack_15 Taintor, Iowa USA
Thu Dec 3, 2009 11:52 AM CST
Thank You. I write only of the emotions I hold within, events that have occured in my short life. My poetry is my voice.
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Andy1905 kilmarnock, Central, Scotland UK
Thu Dec 3, 2009 3:44 PM CST
erm think this is about self harming ?? I can't say I understand what pleasure it gives you, but I have my own little vices in life,I'd be really sad to give up on its really thought provoking and well worded and it takes all kinds to make this world would be dull if everyone thought and acted the same!! and honey I'm no critic just a nice poem
teddybear
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Shortstack_15 Taintor, Iowa USA
18 hours ago
Yes, this poem is about self injury, how one learns to love it... as it slowly consumes the body. However, it is a "learned" behavior so it can be unlearned as well. Through the words I express, I relearn healthier ways to cope.
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Shortstack_15Taintor, Iowa USA

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