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DISTANT

Author: locohobo

Distant, the echo’s of my heart
Far flung,upon the seas of life
Oblivioned to strangers hand
Trialed,in turmoiled living strife

Diluted, the fullness of my blood
Strewn seed of careless youth
In isolation distance spans
You my son, in living truth

Consummation of misguided love
In abandonment life begun
Thru primal urge ignorance blossomed
In denial unity unsung

Deprivation of sight and sound
Newborn innocence unbeheld
Blame could not apportion round
Man in doubt, his might is felled

Timeless thoughts of who and where
Aliened fruit of my urge, unloved
Physical sense of longings quenched
Prodigal times of my life unproved

Relieved, at last you have a name
My circle’s round, My life complete
But judge me not by others sound
See My Face before ere we meet

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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:26 AM CST

About this poem:
I have struggled to express my thoughts and feelings of a part of my life unfulfilled..Of the dangerous days of youth and ignorance...Of how the careless exuberance of youth can bring about the unfathomable consequences and agonies in innocent life...
Though this work tells me its finished, I still feel there is a whole world of unexpressed feeling I need to include. So it may be amended at some point....

I dedicate this to Tim....
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Comments


sshore Hyderabad India
Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:49 AM CST
this is a wonder!
thankyou!
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gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Thu Oct 22, 2009 9:32 AM CST
Great writing locohobo.Thanks for sharinghug wave
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jazzy75 Houston, Texas USA
Thu Oct 22, 2009 9:35 AM CST
locohobo, enjoyed reading! Thankscheers
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locohobo Shanghi, Clare Ireland
Sun Oct 25, 2009 10:18 PM CST
Thank you folkscheers
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