~Insult's Where I Stand~
Author: BentleeAcidic attack melt's the skin of not thick, your wretchid self thought's impaled amidst innocence not of you. . . you go why'd they step back in your darkened view. . . truth is your skin is thin attack is your que. . . your past is your future You've limited ur view, complexity of mind mis-sorted state, mistake to another it's misguided wake, do they deserve your self guided fate . . . ~
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 3:45 PM CST
About this poem:
Experience open's the eyes, does it not? I've walked it an been subject to it as well an a thought to be shared. A topic I had to write about:)
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amahlala
Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:02 PM CST
An interesting view...
Bentlee
trenton, Ontario Canada
Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:15 PM CST
Diversity in writing is so complex, as we all know, in my writing i'd like to be able to reach all the parallell's with thought in multiple ways. Let's face it i'm a true libra an believe that somehow there can be more peace in this world we live in. :)
amahlala
Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:16 PM CST
And as a fellow Libran, I would wish it were so but.......
andrew149
Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:20 PM CST
excure me.........us pisceans belive in that stuff as well you know........xxx
amahlala
Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:22 PM CST
I know the Pisces believe in peace also...3 of my darling snot-nosed booger rats are pisces! Hi Andrew
andrew149
Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:25 PM CST
wot's a booger rat.....would I like one do you think??? wot do they taste like?..........xxx
amahlala
Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:27 PM CST
Snot-nosed booger rats are children! At least mine were!
Bentlee
trenton, Ontario Canada
Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:30 PM CST
Lol you two again, an second Ama's motion, hi Andrew an welcome back:) now the but Ama is what it is but it's got to start somewhere, the change that is eh cheers my friend.
andrew149
Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:50 PM CST
Yes ama and all that.....but do they taste good....?......getting hungry is all