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Whiskey, Women, and Cards

Author: Barrellofart

Lips 'sticked, late night thrift rips fixed, neon shifts' clock ticks
Tricks whipped, bottles tipped, the tippers sip, sit back, sickly slick
Sittin' fit, hittin' hard shit, every bit they sift, drain, an' drip
Cigs lit, legit with gin grins and grit, sharp wits like sharp riffs

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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:46 PM CST

About this poem:
The title says it all.
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amahlala Las Vegas, Nevada USA
Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:49 PM CST
Like it..hard and gritty...good one!thumbs up
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jazzy75 Houston, Texas USA
Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:01 AM CST
Barrellofart, I agree with Ama...good readhead banger
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Sunnn Valletta, Majjistral Malta
Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:04 AM CST
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Barrellofart Montcalm County, Michigan USA
Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:44 PM CST
Thanks so much, ladies. dancing
gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Wed Oct 28, 2009 4:34 AM CST
Very well expressed Barrellofart.I like your poemhug bouquet
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