surreal...

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surreal...

eyes closed,
and peaceful snoring,

brain is active
in a dream.

living surreal,
jumping, flying,
understanding animal talk.

incredible feats
with no defeats,
ofcourse there is no dying.

for if you fall
you're jolted up.
saved from the ordeal.

heart thumping,
brow sweating.
momentarily disoriented.

realisation !
thank God.
thank you God - it was a dream.

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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:41 AM CST

About this poem:
it must have happenned to all of us at some point in our dreamy world.
hugs xx virgosign

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Comments

andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Sat Oct 31, 2009 5:45 AM CST

thankyou for a good read, I enjoyed this one......andrew

boyshchrm6 barrie, Ontario Canada
Sat Oct 31, 2009 7:53 AM CST

Thanks virgosign.Reminds me of the times I was a superhero for
a few hours at least.lol

jazzy75 Houston, Texas USA
Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:19 AM CST

virgosign - enjoyable read. thank you for sharing :-)

Redex Wansbeck, Northumberland, England UK
Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:38 AM CST

I do know what you mean, but boyshchrm6 has just made me laugh with his comment, says it all thankyou for that share

aware3 navarre, Florida USA
Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:42 AM CST

From 1 virgo to another, I really enjoyed this poem, n identified with the truth of it, n in ur last line where u say Thank God it was a dream- I have found that line works also even when we know it isn't ! Thanks 4 sharing ! aware3

gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Sat Oct 31, 2009 2:32 PM CST

Oh yes Thank God its only a dream-i like your poem virgosign.Thanks for sharing