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SPACE in TIME

Author: Redex

There is a brick wall
It,s really got to fall
One brick at a time
Then the space will shine

The space is alight
With a bright sun light
Fears, cries, sorrows are all
Laughter, jealousies and pride stonewalled

In this space, time is no more
No ceilings, walls or floors
Everthing that is, is firmly askewed
Visions of calm and peace are renewed

There,s a hole in this space
were all not meant to see
For some, its feet firmly on the ground
For others only a glimpse is found

To sit in such emptness,is
Is surely one of life,s greatest bliss,es
It does take, of course, its toll
For its only human we are after all

So be really HAPPY and not sad
To be FEELING anything at all, can,t be bad
For if all found that hole in the space
There would be no more human race.

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Posted: Mon Nov 2, 2009 5:20 AM CST

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Neostylites Kermanshah Iran
Mon Nov 2, 2009 5:30 AM CST
Dear Redex, another beautiful, enchanting poem! Thanks.
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andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Mon Nov 2, 2009 5:35 AM CST
thankyou a lovely read, and a beautiful poem.......andrew....xxx
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jazzy75 Houston, Texas USA
Mon Nov 2, 2009 7:34 AM CST
Redex - moving poem my friend...really felt this one deep insidehug hug bouquet
Redex Wansbeck, Northumberland, England UK
Tue Nov 3, 2009 10:14 AM CST
Thankyou for reading, I forgot to put comment, it was in memory of a dear friend, legacy left was deep sorrow, but also a renewed awakening that each day should be lived to the full. And when things got bad, as they do, be glad that we can even feel that too xx
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anngi Mumbai India
Tue Nov 3, 2009 12:49 PM CST
Lovely, simply lovely
trurorob Alicante, Valenciana Spain
Tue Nov 3, 2009 12:52 PM CST
nice one Redex
rob
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poetengineer riyadh Saudi Arabia
Tue Nov 3, 2009 1:18 PM CST
it is beautiful poem ,thanks for u
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RedexWansbeck, Northumberland, England UK

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