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The Orange Good and The White Sun_3

Author: Iiris

I looked at the sun.
It was the same white.
And suddenly I imagined the whole Universe with the white sun in the middle and a little orange Good that was jumping from one planet to another.
And the whole Universe was its home.

It has been many years since the Good left me, but I'm still waiting for it.
Maybe it will come back...
Not forever...
I know it can't live in our world...
But just for a while, to see each other.
And I look at the white sun, and I hear its whispering: “Wait, wait... wait...”
And I ask for how long should I wait, but it just repeats: “Wait, wait... wait...”
And something ugly hides from me the white sun...
It's hanging and laughing in the clouds.
And I'm pretty sure that the Good will come back.
It won't forget me.
But what if it can't find my house or my city?
When I think of it I feel so cold and scared.
It might be that a little orange Good is walking now somewhere on this planet.
So, if you meet it, please say that I'm missing my little friend.
Perhaps, it doesn't know what it is “to miss”, but it doesn't matter.
It will ask you: “What is missing?”, and maybe the white sun will smile and become yellow again.

Kiev,
2003

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Posted: Fri Nov 6, 2009 12:53 PM CST

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jazzy75 Houston, Texas USA
Fri Nov 6, 2009 12:55 PM CST
Iiris - I enjoyed your poem and story :-) It was riveting...couldn't wait for you to post the last segment. Thank you for a great readhug
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Iiris Espoo, Etela-Suomen Laani Finland
Fri Nov 6, 2009 2:15 PM CST
Dear Jazzy,

Thank you for the comment, I'm happy that you enjoyed this story :) handshake
andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Fri Nov 6, 2009 3:14 PM CST
thankyou....... enjoyed reading this story.......andrew....xxx
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sabeel cochin,kerala. India
Sat Nov 7, 2009 1:00 AM CST
dear poet friend Iiris,
it is so happy to read your poem again...
i enjoyed your poem ...

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Iiris Espoo, Etela-Suomen Laani Finland
Sat Nov 7, 2009 1:44 AM CST
Thank you guys!
Nice to meet you all here again, it has been a while since I visited here :)
cheers
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Galatea Tallinn, Tartumaa Estonia
Sat Nov 7, 2009 1:50 AM CST
Such a warm story, brings back to a childhood :)
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Witchaywoman Carpentersville, Illinois USA
Sat Nov 7, 2009 1:52 AM CST
That was cute!
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Iiris Espoo, Etela-Suomen Laani Finland
Sat Nov 7, 2009 4:36 AM CST
Thank you all for the comments :)
I did really want to write something warm :)
gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Sat Nov 7, 2009 1:05 PM CST
Beautiful poem Iiris.Very artistically expressed-i love itapplause hug bouquet
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Neostylites Kermanshah Iran
Sat Nov 7, 2009 3:47 PM CST
A very nice poem; thanks for sharing it.
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