I rail against my feeble body that once was so swift despair when tasks take three times longer now it crept up on me seemly overnight, this thing they call age, it pulls me down with it's agonising slowness
Always been the adventurer travelling the world lived in some strange places with different rules strived to live each minute to the max, exalt in life taking no as no answer, digging under the surface
Many wondrous sights I have seen during my time the miracle of birth, so fresh and new each time so full of promise, a whole life yet to be lived all that's before you is a blank sheet waiting patiently
I know for me that sheet is very full of doings life is for living and boy, I have lived it in full yet still I rail against age itself and the slowness my mind can still take flight when it likes
Yet this shell in which I abide is crumbling each year I seem to get slower and slower such a pain, a burden and a strain on me oh, to be young once more and be able to be fast
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 21, 2013
Well I think most here can relate to this.Its certainly an overwhelming task when simple day to day activities may seem like a mountain before you.A touching reflective piece my friend.Keep young.
kidmenotusa, Washington USAJul 22, 2013
soooo true....our eyes fade,knees give way, gitting up is now a chore no longer a easy movement,skin bruses from a simple touch and it get much more as the years move on taking the ageless days away. I liked your poem
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJul 22, 2013
hi dear M.M I try dear I try lol age carries on ty for reading
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJul 22, 2013
hey GF been a long time hope all's well with you aging is the pits for sure grrr lol ty for stopping in
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