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choice

Author: sabeel

like everyone i have a choice
to write or not.
i know if i choose , not to write
i cannot become a part of good people here
who loves , cares, and advice , only for the best!
never wants to hurt.
i can choose to live like a ordinary man
but i wish to be a different.
i am here ,like you to be the best,

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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 11:44 PM CST

About this poem:
sometimes i need help...
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sabeel cochin,kerala. India
Wed Sep 16, 2009 4:04 PM CST
THANKS ALL FOR THE KIND HELP AND COMMENTS TO ENCOURAGE ME TO WRITE WELL, i know it is not easy to get commetns from best poets like you,
thanks all.
sabeel.teddybear teddybear teddybear
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andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Wed Sep 16, 2009 4:11 PM CST
Although, we don't comment on all, (If we did, it would have no meaning), we read most, time allowing........if you have difficulty with any words or meanings in English, (I know it can be a difficult language, even I have problems sometimes!), mail me, I will do my best to help.........Andrew....cool
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jazzy75 Houston, Texas USA
Wed Sep 16, 2009 10:07 PM CST
I love your sincerity...keep writing from your heart and it will always come out right :-)
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Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:12 PM CST
never underestimate yourself, you write from your inner strength that GOD gave you..
thumbs up handshake gift
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sabeel cochin,kerala. India
Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:18 PM CST
dear poet andrew.
thanks a lot my dear poet, i honour your help,
i need your help to do the best....
sabeel.teddybear
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sabeel cochin,kerala. India
Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:20 PM CST
dear poet jazzy,
i will keep that words in my heart..
sabeel.applause dancing
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sabeel cochin,kerala. India
Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:21 PM CST
dear poet fareaway,
thanks for the comment,
i like your poems.
and the methode you used ..
sabeel.teddybear bouquet
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Fri Sep 18, 2009 12:46 AM CST
i think your poems speak of things as if they are happening a visual treat. and what you write is so down to earth yet so special.
cheering
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gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:28 AM CST
Always just write-if its comes from within-its NEVER wrong sabeel.I like your poemshug bouquet
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andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK
Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:37 AM CST
there is only ever one reason to write my friend, and, that is because you like it, being true to yourself is what counts, being good is only an opinion, and is unimportant, truly.....andrew...cool
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