You were flying...
Author: IirisYou were some blue bird,
You were flying
Between happyness and destiny.
You were thinking
To wind up with dew
To heaven…
You were white ghost,
You were flying
Over the sun!
You were touching
Something
In dense smoke…
You were screaming
With white thirst
For exhausted Earth.
You were dreaming
That some day
You will stop to be a soul.
25.06.2009
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 6:21 AM CST
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sabeel
cochin,kerala. India
Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:55 AM CST
hi, Iiris,
yes offcourse, thats true.everyone wish to fly high.
good , go on, you may hit the top...
only the special one gets the ability to write powerfully.
thank you.
sabeel.
Iiris
Espoo, Etela-Suomen Laani Finland
Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:07 PM CST
Thank you!
By the way, I have tried to fly in my childhood, unfortunately it hasn't worked :)))
sabeel
cochin,kerala. India
Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:46 PM CST
hi, Iiris,
if any like to fly , there is no limit to fly, shy is high, no one can stop you.
no age, limit.
the matter is how much you wish...
i think , many times , a flying scene comes in your dreams...
go on , you can....
sabeel.
writer
dhaka Bangladesh
Fri Jun 26, 2009 1:14 AM CST
Hi
Iris, I dont know how can give you Thanks...Your thoughts are nice and meaningfull. Go ahead and write as a blue bird.......I expect your great success in life...take care...Bye..L...R...
CHILLICHOW
johannesburg, Alberton South Africa
Fri Jun 26, 2009 6:51 AM CST
hi iris! besides a beautiful thought you have shared with us, you too are a very beautiful lady! All the best to you.
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Fri Jun 26, 2009 7:14 AM CST
and yet again another one........ great ,keep it up!
Iiris
Espoo, Etela-Suomen Laani Finland
Sat Jun 27, 2009 3:52 AM CST
Thank to everybody!
I'm pretty sure that all of you could fly at least once in the life :)
prasan
north western Sri Lanka
Sat Jun 27, 2009 3:58 AM CST
hi respected you,
Actually i am realy appreciate you and. wish you all the best for future. As well as would like to convey with honestly you are calling eminent feeling with others heart.
Thanks.
Prasan
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Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:03 PM CST
Hi Angel Iiris yes my blue bird
and I 'm flying if you want hand down
Later together flying heaven
ooo love my hearth
Iiris
Espoo, Etela-Suomen Laani Finland
Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:45 AM CST
It seems that you are answering me with poetry...
You must be a poet as well!
