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Love Paradise..!!

Author: moonlove

I can see a sparkle in your eyes which make me delight !!
and there's a place in your heart..
where i want to live without sadness !!

I wish I could be your Breathing
for what more I could ask for ?
to be conceived in your heart,
born in your eyes, live in your heart, and die on your shoulder..!!

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Posted: Sun Jun 7, 2009 5:44 AM CST

About this poem:
I wrote this Poem..!!
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moonlove chiang mai, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand
Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:38 PM CST
I was wrote this pome, how you think about it??bouquet bouquet
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gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:42 PM CST
Ahhh moonlove-you are such a sweet person-i just know you will find himhug bouquet
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sabeel cochin,kerala. India
Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:43 PM CST
DEAR POET moonlove,
good poem. good imagination.but i am not sure about this line ""where i want to live without sadness !!""

it is not possible as you dream.read a real life from GYPSY HEART'S poem; TWO SIDES OF A COIN'

ANY WAY , you write very well.
sabeel.teddybear
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QuietStormF Southern Ontario, Ontario Canada
Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:02 PM CST
Very nice Moonlove! You write beautifully.. teddybear
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moonlove chiang mai, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand
Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:03 PM CST
hey gypsyheart, thanks though, i love your poem as well....bouquet
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moonlove chiang mai, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand
Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:04 PM CST
Hey, gypsyheart, I love to read your poem as well, I think you got really nice poem!!
I will read more about pomes after i finished my Final exam...
thanks for the complimentsbouquet
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moonlove chiang mai, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand
Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:06 PM CST
hey, Sabee, thanks for reading, i do read your poem, it was beautiful, I'm only the biggner, hehe
thanks!!bouquet
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moonlove chiang mai, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand
Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:06 PM CST
hey, Sabee, thanks for reading, i do read your poem, it was beautiful, I'm only the biggner, hehe
thanks!!bouquet
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moonlove chiang mai, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand
Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:10 PM CST
hey QuietStormF, thanks, you also got beautiful poems!!
maybe something wrong with my reply comment here!!
I don't know what wrong with computer bouquet
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moonlovechiang mai, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand

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