What were you thinking? Did she not kiss your Cheek like a dove from Heaven?
Can't you remember Her glowing smile As you walked Through the door? She just needed a Man to comfort Her.. To protect her She really saw You as a knight In shining armour But somehow You took a Different path in Life Something in your Mind said.. "I'll take an approach To violence You thought, " I'll Scream and shout" I'll make her fear My presence Because.. I am MAN! Really? What are you? I have an answer! You are nothing But bone and muscle You are yesterdays T-Shirt that reads, "I'm to stupid to love A woman" And now she's trying To get away from you Because she realizies You are a loser of The first class She should have Never put her hand Upon your cheek Because you are Death warmed over Do you know what You missed by Your subhuman Behaviour? Of course you Don't You're dried up Slime on a hot Sidewalk Her cherry lips Were meant for A king But you took her Sweet loving heart To the dungeons Of hell And when you're Sitting behind bars In some hellish Prison for all Your demonic Abuse Then perhaps you'll Ponder..after twenty Years That you traded the Kiss of Heaven For the fires Of Hell!
Very strong write ~ seemingly written with much hate and distain !
Hopefully this did not occur too close to home.
Mady
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USADec 4, 2016
Mady.. Just a made up story dear. I hate no one. But for $29.95 I'll tell you who I love.
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Abby1963California, USADec 4, 2016
Your poem hit home great write
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMay 7, 2017
So relevant- if there was a way to post this on a billboard near every person who is treating someone this way...
As my dearAbby stated: Great write! You know how to say what needs to be said in a way(I'm not nearly the communicator you are... so am struggling here) - a way that reaches those who read it. You have a great talent along with a kind heart and a great character.
Always, Cat & Chris
roseoscuraAuckland, New ZealandMay 8, 2017
Well written Cafe!!!
serena123durban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 9, 2017
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WOW !!!
Very strong write ~ seemingly written with much hate and distain !
Hopefully this did not occur too close to home.
Mady
Just a made up story dear. I hate no one. But for
$29.95 I'll tell you who I love.
As my dearAbby stated: Great write! You know how to say what needs to be said in a way(I'm not nearly the communicator you are... so am struggling here) - a way that reaches those who read it.
You have a great talent along with a kind heart and a great character.
Always, Cat & Chris