Okay Ross-I'll return the favor for you-
First off- please, please, please, for the love of BLT'S- CHANGE THAT HEADLINE. It's too generic and very cliche. If at all possible, avoid, I repeat, AVOID using the words: looking for, seeking, would like to find.... etc. Be creative, Your photo and headline are what gets women to look at your profile- so sell it.
Secondly- check your spelling. Some mistakes in there- especially towards the bottom- word "attention" needs some "attention".
Finally- you need to put complete sentences. Remove the run-ons and all the ,'s.
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" well im 35 years old, true saggitarius, blonde hair , blue eyes, love to quad ride, going out for a occaisional drink and karaoke, big time movie fanatic, walks in the park, i love to cook, love tattoos- i have a few , love the fall spending time outdoors, i have a good job, nice truck, hard worker, people person- known to be a gabber once i know you friends and family say im sweet good hearted, take to much bull sometimes im local in kingman arizona, been here 11 years. originally from california, "
Be more descriptive of WHO you are, not just your life history. You have lots of potential here, but it's all too general. Add some personality to it- humor is a great way to spice up a profile.
Hope that helps- Wish you all the best.
Shannon
