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Hi Ghostrider6478

I've had a look over your profile and reworked it, feel free to use it or toss it out. I remained true to the essence of the original but toned it down and made definite statements about what you want in a woman.




Yours
TELL ME STRIGHT UP
Thats all I ever here is oh your such a nice guy.. Than why do I only get crack-heads and users and loosers. I'll take anyone on you see in person than tell me what I'm doing wrong. LOOK this is no bullshit, I'm not getting any younger. I'm DEAD SERIOUS if you are not, leave me alone... I do have years of street smarts. There is nothing that I have not experenced. I've learned from the best of the best.. But I can always learn more or maybe even better. I would really appriciate some good advise in return for something you need.. Thankyou Ghostrider6478

Mine
Honesty and Integrity
The on-line dating world is a crazy place and believe me I have met my share of people who are just out to waste my time and make life a bit less enjoyable, I will not accept anyone who's life is in chaos or is a drug user. With age comes life experience, and my experiences have shown me what my wants and needs really are and I'm not afraid to go out and get them.




Yours
About Me: I'm a slender, sparkling blue eyed guy that likes to go out for a dinner and movies, carnivals, fairs. I love going on long bike rides on my Harley Davidson. Hanging out in the warm weather with friends and family. Back yard bar B-Ques and fun atmosphere social settings. I enjoy being around kids and laughing. I enjoy playing card games.

Mine
About Me: When you see me winding up the road on my Harley and you think, this maybe the sparkling blue eyed bad boy I've been looking for, let me tell you this, only if you're a person of value, enjoy spending quality time with family and friends, have a sense of humor, hold down a steady job and have some form of reliable transportation will you get a second look from me.




Yours
I'm looking for: I want a mature women who is ready to settle down. She has to like bike rides on motorcycles and being in the warm weather. She needs to be able to hold down a steady job and have a form of transportation. She needs to like to laugh and hang out with friends and family. She should like to walk on the beach or go to the casino once in awhile. I prefer Latino and African American woman but am open to all possibilities.

Mine
The woman to join me on my journey on the road of life must be mature within herself and ready to settle down. She must be passionate about Motorcycles and enjoy getting out on to the blacktop with me in the wind and bright sunshine. While I prefer Latino and African American women I am open to all possibilities. If this sounds like you and you want a strong confident man who isn't afraid to set boundaries you may just be the one.




The pictures you put up are great but a closer headshot for the main would help in my opinion.


Hope this this helps and good luck.
:)Rik

Well said and revised. Ghostrider, I would take this guys advice. Good pictures.

ElektrkMoonlyt the guy asked for a lil advise not for you to write a script for him

Ok, I'll give this a try, Hey Ghostrider6478, this is just another mans opinion, chew it up and spit out the waste.
First of all, try putting a smile on your face, It will work wonders.
I see you sitting there on the steps like Mr. Tough Guy, hey lighten up a touch, women need love and tenderness, so let some show through, C'mon, we know its there...lol
when you get to the "What I'm Looking for part", Its all, SHE HAS TO...SHE NEEDS TO....SHE MUST.....Sort of sounds like a Rule Book for controlling Men. Soften it up a touch and let them know just how Patient and Understanding you really are. Let them know just how you plan to meet them in the middle and how THEIR opinion counts also (cause dude, it does). When the women start beating down your door, you can weed them out accordingly. The Profile's purpose is to simply get them to turn their head your way. Your Slamming down the rules and weeding them out before you even get to talk to them.
Profiles are misunderstood enough on their own, dont help the issue. So be simple and Loving and they will talk to you....discuss and fine tune things later. Losers and Crack Heads need someone to lead them along, cause they cant do it themselves, thats why your getting their response.
Just be the Good Dude you already are AND WRITE IT DOWN in a loving and giving way. The hair on your chest wont fall off Dude...lol Good Luck....John

PS.....You already got the Harley and Walks on the Beach thing going on.......they love that...whats your Prob Dude, show some love and that THEY matter too

ahh jest pass that godamn crack pipe
hey sas how u doing ..
seenthats one good girl n you obviously just can't spot em!